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Feel So Alive
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Feel So Alive |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
All things in Nature speak Of balance and harmony Things all who strive to seek Say how they want it to be Nothing is as true As the moon in the nighttime sky Nothing quite as pure As the look in your eyes I can’t escape what makes me so tragic I alone, know what that thing is Some sort of elemental magic, To pretend this is where I'll always live Never have I felt every nerve on fire Never have I ever felt so alive Cool wind blowing through my hair Moonlight shining upon my face How much do I want to stay there In that dark and lonely place Alone, you and I forever are Never let the feelings restrain Down comes the bright and eternal stars Washing us clean with cool, sweet rain All things in Nature conspire To not release me, just yet; Knowing full well how inspired, I am at being so wet Never have I felt every nerve on fire Never have I ever felt so alive |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
PK, almost two poems in one. Write on. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
wow, I like this, adrenaline really flowing here, very much alive! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"All things in Nature conspire To not release me, just yet; Knowing full well how inspired, I am at being so wet" I love this  |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I knew you'd like this SEA. Or, at least I thought so *L* Thank you Rosebud and interloper. |
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