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JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

0 posted 2001-05-03 09:06 PM

If I Could

If I could hold you with my words, I would
wrap them around your waist
gently, loosely
so that you wouldn’t hesitate
to move closer
leaning into me
If I could touch you with my words, I would
move them over your body
slowly, incessantly
until your breath became quick
your skin moist against mine
in lovers motion
If I could make you smile with my words, I would
send you giggles every day
light, breezy
a soft southern breeze
cooling in your shadow
If I could see you with my words, I would
watch you from afar
dancing, writing
to your hearts content
never looking back

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2001-05-03 09:23 PM

Very Beautiful, JLR, it reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back that compliments this one perfectly. I'll post it..

*smiles*
~Tier

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-05-03 10:43 PM

JLR~
This is so beautifully written.

'If I could see you with my words, I would
watch you from afar
dancing, writing
to your hearts content
never looking back'

All of your thoughts reached out to me.
Thank you for sharing this.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-05-04 03:17 AM

Let my thread intertwine with yours. For smiles you give to me, touch the essense of me. This pulls and draws me ever so closer...
closer... LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2001-05-04 09:53 AM

Ah lady...what tender beautiful thoughts you have penned...if these dont touch your loves heart...well then baby nothing will...hugs to you

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2001-05-04 11:23 AM

I just wanted to say I enjoyed reading this.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-04 12:51 PM

RJ, you know that I loved this one. . .

Thanks. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-05-04 01:00 PM

Beautiful, tender, just enough privacy of moment. Very much enjoyed the read.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-05-04 07:13 PM

Sensual, lovely, soft and sweet, I love it!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

9 posted 2001-05-04 08:18 PM

This was so very well done. Nice subtle touch.

"I am not now that which I have been."

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

10 posted 2001-05-04 08:31 PM

If I could
I would breathe
the silver deep

and know the next
is music from home
and sway once in Passing

for you know
all of the silver horn fade
at least once then wink competely

A turn from your tale yes
a turn from your meanainc not
I would go to her immediately and forever

Bearing both completely
never bothering to assauge nor stop
only kiving every moment in the light

we poor wretched humans have
the audacity to call Love
which means define what forever giving means

Sorry RJ. KJ got carried away, I know, again.

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