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If I Could
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If I Could |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
If I Could If I could hold you with my words, I would wrap them around your waist gently, loosely so that you wouldn’t hesitate to move closer leaning into me If I could touch you with my words, I would move them over your body slowly, incessantly until your breath became quick your skin moist against mine in lovers motion If I could make you smile with my words, I would send you giggles every day light, breezy a soft southern breeze cooling in your shadow If I could see you with my words, I would watch you from afar dancing, writing to your hearts content never looking back |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very Beautiful, JLR, it reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back that compliments this one perfectly. I'll post it.. *smiles* ~Tier |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ This is so beautifully written. 'If I could see you with my words, I would watch you from afar dancing, writing to your hearts content never looking back' All of your thoughts reached out to me. Thank you for sharing this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Let my thread intertwine with yours. For smiles you give to me, touch the essense of me. This pulls and draws me ever so closer... closer... LP Day in Day out...My love for you grows. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah lady...what tender beautiful thoughts you have penned...if these dont touch your loves heart...well then baby nothing will...hugs to you |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I just wanted to say I enjoyed reading this. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
RJ, you know that I loved this one. . .  Thanks. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, tender, just enough privacy of moment. Very much enjoyed the read. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sensual, lovely, soft and sweet, I love it! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
This was so very well done. Nice subtle touch. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
If I could I would breathe the silver deep and know the next is music from home and sway once in Passing for you know all of the silver horn fade at least once then wink competely A turn from your tale yes a turn from your meanainc not I would go to her immediately and forever Bearing both completely never bothering to assauge nor stop only kiving every moment in the light we poor wretched humans have the audacity to call Love which means define what forever giving means Sorry RJ. KJ got carried away, I know, again. |
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