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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-03 05:05 PM



We were both sleeping,
but when we awoke,
we were both kissing.
Your hands touched me, where I wanted.
My hands touched you, where you wanted.
Pleasuring each other so,
in the mist of dreams and lust.
My long hair you caress,
as we dance the dance of us.
Our spines vibrating love.
As we sweat each others sweat.
Fulfilling blissfully and totally,
our minds, our bodies, our dreams.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-03-2001).]

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JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-05-03 05:53 PM


I bet you get all the good mail, too, don't ya?  You did it again!  Great write.
redheart angrybraids
Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2001-05-09 12:08 PM


yeah i'm sure ems do
- libidinous to the mind

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2001-05-14 07:56 PM


Walker.....
You have the most delicious way of writing an erotic/romantic mixture.......truly the stuff that very sweet dreams are made of!!



Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 05-14-2001).]

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