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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-05-11 04:04 PM

The leaves had collected on the ground
The wind had turned a cooler shade
Somehow there was a familiar sound
In every chorus Nature made

Freshest of air, sweetest of smell
Hoping to hold onto this moment in time
Keeping his silence, wanting to tell
All who would listen to his mind

With a new season, old season’s memory brings
Foretelling also future if dared to dream
Seeing this and many more things,
But the visions are never what they seem

What is Autumn if not a subconscious metaphor
A wake up call before the dead that is winter
His heart cries out like never before
Even as the trees crack, and splinter

Terrible though, that the knowledge is gained
That beginnings fade into endings twilight
And all that is achieved is somehow in vain
Like the quickening coming of Winter’s night

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-11 04:26 PM

Oh my, it is just come summer, and this brings winter to the fore....

well done, Sir!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-05-11 04:34 PM

Freshest of air, sweetest of smell
Hoping to hold onto this moment in time
Keeping his silence, wanting to tell
All who would listen to his mind...

you have some mind PK.. *s

~Wynter
p.s. all my nights are Wynter nights..teasin'

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-05-11 10:45 PM

This feels so inviting......I don't know how to explain it....LOL I just love Autumn....that is my favorite time of year....very soothing to me. I liked this very much

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-05-11 11:40 PM

What is Autumn if not a subconscious metaphor
A wake up call before the dead that is winter
His heart cries out like never before
Even as the trees crack, and splinter

Terrible though, that the knowledge is gained
That beginnings fade into endings twilight
And all that is achieved is somehow in vain
Like the quickening coming of Winter’s night
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could those verses be any cooler?
could they have more cleverly done imagery and angst?
me thinks not...
and Im always listening to that poetic mind

Did you make it to the Milky Way,
see the lights faded
that heaven is overrated
Did you fall for a shooting star
One without a permanent scar

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2001-05-12 03:51 PM

Totally cool! I loved this very much!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-05-14 04:16 PM

This is quite lovely....

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2001-05-14 07:40 PM

loved it

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-05-14 08:03 PM

Beautiful!

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