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Wrought Quintessence
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Wrought Quintessence |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wrought Quintessence By: Noah Eaton 5/13/01 Once upon a time in heaven’s palace I was born in God’s enchanted workshop Carved from wood and painted in His hands Breathing light upon me, turning me into a real boy, to live on Earth Growing through a somber boyhood, never satisfied Bleeding and crying and screaming, day after day Tight-lipped and tongue-tied, hurt by abuse, hanging by torpor Ending at the ride into adulthood, now healed and edified Understanding leads to desire, for what I really want A special love of my life who endlessly swims I my dreams Then I saw God’s face in the sky, and he told me, “The girl of your dreams that you greatly desire Will become yours forever, to love eternally Just keep true to yourself, do what you know is right Love yourself and life, and you will find yourself when you least expect it with her!” For days I did what he told me, sharing my love and His to others Helping all the people I can out, making them feel more hopeful Healing wounds with a tourniquet of faith Dreaming endlessly this day could be tomorrow, to hold my dream lover Years passed by, still believing in myself but feeling so empty Wanting ever so much to have someone to share my life with Believing that dreams can come true, treasuring them dear Still feeling troubled, sad to see I remain lonely One summer day near sunset, I walked along a quiet beachside Smelling the salty sea water, seeing lights shine from the clouds down upon the bay When all a sudden I look down on the sand to see a wooden doll of a girl Looking just like the girl in my dreams, starting to cry feeling the emptiness sting me I burst into tears of sadness, holding the doll against my chest Knowing it’s been years, and I still don’t have her Teardrops fall upon my chest and the doll, the doll’s eyes shimmer when I don’t notice Glistening like stars, as the skies light up with northern lights flooding with white doves I continue to cry as light winds of cotton candy wind brush against me, eyes closed in hurt Bright light exploding silently around me, from the heart of God and the heart of the doll The next second I hear a sweet moan, and I slowly open my eyes, wiping my tears Happily amazed to see I’m holding the girl of my dreams, my life’s heaven I smile noticing I don’t have the doll anymore, it turned into a real girl We smile together looking into each other’s eyes, and she whispers in my ears words of love Reverberating between hearts as I declare my love for her, and she happily giggles and wraps her arms around my neck Smiling as happy as can be, sighing and moaning like a million angels Looking up to the atmosphere curiously, I smile suddenly to see God smiling down upon both of us And then He tells me, “You have given me great joy, you have lightened my heart For the greatest love I could dream for, I grant you your dreams in return May the girl of your dreams forever give you true happiness And bless your life forever, as you will bless hers!” I look deep into her eyes again, and we cry together in euphoria, holding each other All a sudden, we embrace each other lips, kissing as she holds me behind my neck, locking her lips with mine I fall to the sand with her, as fireworks of heaven explode in the sky against the passionate fire red and orange sunset skies Melting under her breath, moaning in delight, we say to each other “I love you!”, as we roll across the soft sands As the skies turn midnight blue, I pick her up, holding her in my arms and she holds on to me Looking into each others eyes, smiling endlessly Living fairy tales as true lovers, as I carry her, kissing as we walk off into our dreams together Holding the love of my life in my arms, to live happily after after… |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
WOW, WOW and WOW again! What a dream come true. You waited a long time and now your time has come. Thanks for taking us on this trip. If we wait long enough and keep the same dream, will we have a chance for our dream to come true? I will believe!!! ME |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
A wonderful fanasty poem you created! I wish you happy journeys in your quest. For this is not my cup of tea if it's directed to me. Good luck! For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, Something must have shone on you when you wrote this . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Try not, do or do not, there is no try . |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Stunning and full of lovely innocence. Corinne |
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