Open Poetry #13 |
Pages Of Life |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My life is an open book the pages are blank you see, there must be someone to fill them and write the words with me. Maybe helping to write a few sentences to fill up this empty page, and perhaps to add a chapter or two before it grows faded and worn with age. It might end up with a happy ending or it might just be a tragedy, but we won't know until we turn the last page; yes we will have to wait to see. When the last page is finally written and the period is marked on the last line, maybe it will turn into a beautiful saga and the story will be yours and mine. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's sure to be a best seller!! wonderful GS. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol Sven, ya know, I don't even care if it's a best seller.......as long as it has that happy ending. Hugs. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I really enjoyed how you wrote this desire to share your life as a shared work of writing a book. And though happy endings aren't ever guaranteed...I've found coming away with a good story is something. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
As time goes on, may the story be happier and happier. *s* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
JLR, thanks for that, much appreciated. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you sigheyes. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Like the song "Unchained Melody" by the Righteous Brothers... I sway to music that you give to my ears, moving across the "Starry Night" beach hand in hand. He bends her back, ever so slowly, hold on as not to lose grip. He looks upon her face, and sees the glow of what full of grace and love. She sees such gentleness in his eyes. Full of warmth and gentleness. As each moments passes, it feels like a lifetime that they knew each other in another time. Meeting each other, but not really speaking. Each seeking each others counsel, ready to respond. These raw gems, even a little rough around the edges Each learning, growing strong as each day's passes side by side. Who would have thought, if you really knew these two - each with their special qualities, willing to share with all. To BC - LP. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When the last page is finally written and the period is marked on the last line, maybe it will turn into a beautiful saga and the story will be yours and mine. ================== Ahhh if only it was as easy as us writing our own ending... creative perspective here GS.. and perfect cadence. well done poetess I miss you so much I cant stand it |
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