Open Poetry #13 |
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Triptych Etchings |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Triptych Etchings ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() Many facets of you paneled in most delicate hue laughter hinged in a trio of thoughts all display sweet recall in kind forever framed to hang in the gallery of my mind A tribute to Marilyn Monroe ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
stuning flow of words, i always enjoy the rythem of your poetry, it flows and each sentance compliment the last good for my mind Kindly, |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yanno there are really only two people I remember daily and those are Princess Diana and Marilyn Munro, as they were both spectacular, but oh so sad. It was nice to see you capture the laughing Marilyn, and this was so well done Marge, I loved it! Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartAngryBraids~ And YOU are good for the forums ! Please stay a long, long time. I hope you are well ... My friend, it is so nice to see you. Many new faces here ... but the seasoned faces are held in gentle fondness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ There was a magic of childlike quality in her laughter~ She was a graceful tragic figure ... but I recall the grace mostly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
this is a nice tribute to Maryilyn. So beautiful and so tragic. Joyce |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good...and for some reason, the concise and brief tribute, fits. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, you paint a beautiful portrait always. I recall Marilyn in the same way I think Mary of Magdala, she offered so much and had a heart that needed to sing. This is utterly beautiful, absolutely exquisite. And no love I'm not surprised you painted her so very well you always exceed in whatever you do Love and warm stuff Mushy ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
forever framed to hang in the gallery of my mind Wonderful! loved these lines, sums it all up nicely for me, take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"forever framed to hang in the gallery of my mind" Such excellent visual phrasing Marge ... I loved these lines above, you have such a way with words ... beautifully written! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
M&M captured so well within your musical lines. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Thank you so much for the read. Karilea~ Thanks, my friend. I am pleased you think it fits her life. MarshaLove~ My admiration was also for the strength she showed, beyond the delicacy of who they portrayed her to be. EagleOne~ I appreciate knowing you liked that. Kit~ Alright ! Two votes for that line ... Thanks to you both ! Julian~ Thank you for reading and enjoying. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
stunning, just as she was....beautiful Marge~ Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
She was incredible and so was this. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I have a picture of one of my dearest friends in all his rock n roll glory standing next to a large picture of MM (we stopped in the middle of a large mall to take the pic, got us more than a few curious looks)...I'd almost forgotten about it. I'm going to have to find that picture. Thanks for reminding me...loved this! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nicely done, MArge. Isn't it incredible all of the great people who have the initials MM? It boggles the mind.... ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Thank you so much. SighEyes~ Glad to know you enjoyed it. JLR~ Pleased to have stirred a memory. Hope you find your pic. Balladeer~ Yeah .... you should change your name to something like that ! ! ![]() Only YOU would'a thunk it ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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