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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-05-01 02:00 AM



Triptych Etchings
~*Marge Tindal*~

Many facets of you
paneled in most delicate hue
laughter hinged in a trio of thoughts
all display sweet recall in kind
forever framed to hang
in the gallery of my mind


A tribute to Marilyn Monroe

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-01 02:03 AM


stuning flow of words,
i always enjoy the rythem of your poetry,
it flows and each sentance compliment the last
good for my mind

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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2 posted 2001-05-01 02:07 AM


Yanno there are really only two people I remember daily and those are Princess Diana and Marilyn Munro, as they were both spectacular, but oh so sad.  It was nice to see you capture the laughing Marilyn, and this was so well done Marge, I loved it!

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RedHeartAngryBraids~
And YOU are good for the forums !
Please stay a long, long time.

I hope you are well ...
My friend, it is so nice to see you.
Many new faces here ...
but the seasoned faces are held in gentle fondness.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mysteria~
There was a magic of childlike quality in her laughter~
She was a graceful tragic figure ...
but I recall the grace mostly.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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5 posted 2001-05-01 02:16 AM


this is a nice tribute to Maryilyn.  So beautiful and so tragic.  Joyce
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6 posted 2001-05-01 05:51 AM


Very good...and for some reason, the concise and brief tribute, fits.
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7 posted 2001-05-01 06:12 AM


Margie girl, you paint a beautiful portrait always.

I recall Marilyn in the same way I think Mary of Magdala, she offered so much and had a heart that needed to sing. This is utterly beautiful, absolutely exquisite.

And no love I'm not surprised you painted her so very well you always exceed in whatever you do

Love and warm stuff
                     Mushy
                      

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Between a laugh and a tear...
8 posted 2001-05-01 06:46 AM


forever framed to hang
in the gallery of my mind

Wonderful! loved these lines, sums it all up nicely for me, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


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9 posted 2001-05-01 06:59 AM


"forever framed to hang
in the gallery of my mind"

Such excellent visual phrasing Marge ... I loved these lines above, you have such a way with words ...  beautifully written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2001-05-01 04:54 PM


M&M captured so well within your musical lines.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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11 posted 2001-05-01 08:18 PM


Joyce~
Thank you so much for the read.

Karilea~
Thanks, my friend.
I am pleased you think it fits her life.

MarshaLove~
My admiration was also for the strength she showed,
beyond the delicacy of who they portrayed her to be.

EagleOne~
I appreciate knowing you liked that.

Kit~
Alright !  Two votes for that line ...
Thanks to you both !

Julian~
Thank you for reading and enjoying.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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12 posted 2001-05-02 08:40 PM


stunning, just as she was....beautiful Marge~
Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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13 posted 2001-05-02 09:02 PM


She was incredible and so was this.
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14 posted 2001-05-02 09:20 PM


I have a picture of one of my dearest friends in all his rock n roll glory standing next to a large picture of MM (we stopped in the middle of a large mall to take the pic, got us more than a few curious looks)...I'd almost forgotten about it.  I'm going to have to find that picture.  Thanks for reminding me...loved this!
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15 posted 2001-05-02 09:30 PM


Nicely done, MArge. Isn't it incredible all of the great people who have the initials MM? It boggles the mind....
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16 posted 2001-05-02 10:13 PM


GreenEyes~
Thank you so much.

SighEyes~
Glad to know you enjoyed it.

JLR~
Pleased to have stirred a memory.
Hope you find your pic.

Balladeer~
Yeah .... you should change your name to something like that ! !  
Only YOU would'a thunk it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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