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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-05-02 02:15 PM



Your eyes,
what pain they hold?
I cannot see through them.
If you look my way,
I'll look the other way.
Your eyes, I fear the most.
Will they hunt me when I sleep?
In the daytime, will they try to please me?
Dark eyes, hold many secrets.
You should keep them to yourself.
If you look my way,
I'll look the other way.

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-05-02 06:44 PM


too much in those dark eyes. . . scary sometimes. . .

well done walker. . .

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-05-02 06:47 PM


Windows to the soul reveal too much sometimes.  Joyce
JLR
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3 posted 2001-05-02 09:27 PM


This is different for you...I like the thought and visuals that went with it!
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