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Two Hearts |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Touch my emotions deeply inside help me face fears from which I try to hide. Soothe my soul with your every word allow me to know that my words have been heard. Wipe the tears as they fall from my face give me some room, allow me my space. Walk with me holding my hand share in my love, but don't try to command. Let us share the things that we feel know in your heart that those feelings are real. Stand beside me, not in front or behind share my spirit, my soul and my mind. Give of yourself, as I give to thee let two hearts share between you and me. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
for my heart is hereby given unconditionally. So wonderful to walk side by side with the one you love. LP |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
We hear your heart...and it speaks quite well, indeed. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Stand beside me, not in front or behind share my spirit, my soul and my mind. you are so right.....excellent penned. Charisma |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a giving of ones self, just beautiful D....  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This is a wonderful poem you wrote. Very true. I Love poems that have good insight as well as good rhythm. *JOE* |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes this is lovely and you have dcescribed the best kind of love. Side by side, sharing. Joyce |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
and "sharing" is what it's really all about, isn't it? I very much enjoyed the tenderness and honesty of this pretty poem. Michael Proust- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
D, you always have a way to just reach right in and draw the truest of emotions. . . this is wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LP, it is the ONLY way to walk. Thanks. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady, so glad that you can hear it. Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Charisma, thank you for such a lovely compliment. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren, the giving....is the best part for me. Thanks. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Well thank you Joe, I appreciate it. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Joyce, indeed it is. Thanks. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael, YES it truly is. Thanks *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
AH Sven....sniff sniff......you make me cry from such sweet words......thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
A true showing of heart written in tender words. Very moving. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you sigheyes On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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