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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-05-02 09:03 AM

Passings
Come, swiftly go
Hold gently, not tightly
In the blink of a tomorrow
All dreams will have had opportunities
breathe some wind beneath someone’s wings
The future has long-gone
In single wink
Persist

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

1 posted 2001-05-02 09:10 AM

Persist indeed. I love any kind of determination.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-05-02 09:13 AM

In the blink of a tomorrow
All dreams will have had opportunities
breathe some wind beneath someone’s wings
====================

it is the most we can ever hope for
(to both give and receive)

(you knew I would love this one, right?)

I miss you so much I cant stand it
Seems like my heart is breaking in two
My head says no, but my soul demands it
Everything I do reminds me of you

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-05-02 09:40 AM

So very true ! You always have something uplifting for us, Sunshine, Thank you!

wonderful write!

~Tier

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-05-02 10:17 AM

Karilea--Wonderful!! Yes!!

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

5 posted 2001-05-02 10:18 AM

If you must leave -
however briefly -
if you leave us with such thoughts -
so beutifully expressed -
I'd have to say -
you ameliorate the pain of missing your words -
and I can tolerate it

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-05-02 02:22 PM

Always something to think about, and I am thinking. Persisting seems a constant state of awareness with me!

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-05-02 06:43 PM

continue. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

8 posted 2001-05-02 06:45 PM

This is well done and memorable. Joyce

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-05-02 07:19 PM

Beautifully said Sunshine!!

SEA

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2001-05-02 09:38 PM

Very well done, Karilea, beautiful!

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

11 posted 2001-05-03 12:18 PM

Come and go, yes...persist, not so sure about. Very relatable!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

12 posted 2001-05-03 12:18 PM

Just a few short words about this one....I Love It!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-05-04 09:31 AM

1derful!

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

14 posted 2001-05-04 11:27 AM

Karilea,

WOW

There a very few, who word thoughts like you do...

Regards to one of my favourite poets and a friend,
Sudhir

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