Open Poetry #13 |
Slow Dance |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
They were slow dancing he was holding her so tight, swaying in rhythm across the floor they danced late into the night. Letting the music carry them within it's magical spell looks exchanged between two and only their hearts could tell. The magic of the moment under the moonlight skies sprinkled them with stardust love sparkled in their eyes. He whirled her across the room as love shined from their hearts knowing from that moment on they would never be apart. Within a single moment they found true romance begining with no more than their first slow dance. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Sigh, this was dreamy. If life were only so real always! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
For some I guess love comes this swiftly. Very nice poem. Joyce |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Life is not always so real, but it sure is nice to dream!! Thanks SE. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Joyce, I wish it came this easily to us all. I guess some things worth having are worth waiting for....but man the wait can get to you sometimes.....*s* Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Gently he holds her, taking command. Bringing her in close, fingertips in the small of her back; as he brought her head in close. They swayed on clouds, to the unspoken rythmn - I'm a romanatic at heart. Love the poem. LP |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am a hopeless romantic at heart myself. Thanks for the beautiful words. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Gotta love it when it happens so easily. Well done! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very romantic, that's quite a dance! |
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