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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-05-01 06:52 PM

Distant as the thunder
that rages my heart
the fall upon my knees
the Angels look the part.
I have focused my attention
to the anger built within
the fascination of devils
to bleed me my sin.
In the depths of attrition
I garner my souls last rite
to feel the loss of friendship
gaining my second sight.
How I live is mine
to be taken, not at ease
the words of salvation
come breathe my hearts needs.
Then follow the corrected path
that changes my focused depth
reading not what my words mean
but what they have meant.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-01 08:51 PM

to us, they mean a lot. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-01 11:14 PM

I'll attempt the understanding. your defending your belief - but who is to judge. We choose our own paths. LLP

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2001-05-02 12:32 PM

no one by far is perfect, so try again we all must do, I really can relate to how sometimes life really puts us to the ultimate test.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-05-02 08:28 AM

Distant as the thunder
that rages my heart
the fall upon my knees
the Angels look the part.
I have focused my attention
to the anger built within
the fascination of devils
to bleed me my sin.
===========================
How I live is mine
to be taken, not at ease
the words of salvation
come breathe my hearts needs.
Then follow the corrected path
that changes my focused depth
reading not what my words mean
but what they have meant.
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hey you...welcome back baby...
oh how I have missed reading you..
this is beautiful Michael,
ethereal,intelligent, and sincere ...
written with so much soul and depth of emotion.
All thats left to say is...more please

I miss you so much I cant stand it
Seems like my heart is breaking in two
My head says no, but my soul demands it
Everything I do reminds me of you

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-02 08:30 AM

this tore at my heart

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

6 posted 2001-05-02 11:53 AM

"Friend " is a very powerful word, and in my opinion, to be called one should not be taken lightly and only go to those who are deserving.

Don't be so hard on yourself. "All that glitters, is not gold."

Love,
Marina

PS. This had better mean you will be posting again!!!

GO LEAFS GO!!!

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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