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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2001-04-26 10:43 AM


The day you hurt your head
The Second time ill in bed
Your face a shade of gray
the scars now here to stay

The week you spent in hospital
The surgery they said was vital
Another bout of chicken pox
And all the cuts and bruises go bright blue

I worried about you then
I worry when i do not know
whether you are ill or well
Its just a part of another days show

The first time you went away
Without your voice to make me sway
all along you laugh and sing
oblivious to the bees harshest sting

But i worry enough for both of us
Through autumn summer winter and spring dont last
But I worry most of all that you'll forget
and your love for me will pass
  

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

© Copyright 2001 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-26 12:51 PM


Whose love could pass for one who writes like you?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-05-01 04:00 PM


and through every season, we always worry about those we love....we just can't help it, I guess

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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3 posted 2001-05-01 08:48 PM


Yes we do worry about those we love. Great write.
latin passion
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4 posted 2001-05-02 12:30 PM


no one could forget spring, fall, summer and winter. For each season brings with afresh start. I could not forget. Fret not sir walter.LP
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