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Auguste
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0 posted 2001-05-01 03:12 PM


Just Words

by Michael


They're only words I sometimes write.
You give them value that I don't.
They're simple words borne out of want.
that bare my heart to give it light.

They will outlive the flesh of me,
in some dark attic in the dust.
For therapy, in these I trust,
so I will have no need to flee.

In words I clothe myself, it seems,
to hide the often naked truth,
to heal the wounds from out my youth,
to piece back all the shattered dreams.

They are just words, no wordsmith, I.
I write of things I'd like to see
and often write from memory.
I know I will until I die.

These words are but a tiny part
of what it takes to make the whole.
The bath I use to cleanse the soul.
My medicine to aid the heart.

They're only just a part of me.
There's so much more you'll never know.
I'll take that with me when I go,
like waves drawn back into the sea.

The stars will shine when I am gone.
The earth will turn on as before.
The gulls still race along the shore.
The morning star still kiss the dawn.

You read and yet know not the man.
The author of so many lines.
The heart that beat within your times.
The calloused feet that walked the sand.

But I am so like everyone
and all you see are so like me.
We cork our contents, lest they flee,
until our lives are spent and done.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

© Copyright 2001 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-01 03:14 PM


well maybe i'd like to get to know you. i'd like to get to know you if i could yuh yuh. Happy 1000!!!!!!!!!!!
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2 posted 2001-05-01 03:19 PM


Michael,  
FABULOUS..........
Congratulations........and your heart always shows through.......*s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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3 posted 2001-05-01 03:24 PM


Congratulations, Auguste!  Keep writing to our hearts, and keep expanding our minds...

a thousand thousand more times...

Mabel A. Dilley
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4 posted 2001-05-01 03:33 PM



Happy 1000th!! You may be an ordinary man and a poet; however, I enjoy the extraordinary sensitivity and common sense. So you will have to convince me that you are just "average" some other day.

"I am not now that which I have been."

latin passion
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5 posted 2001-05-01 03:46 PM


I'm sure there are some that would love the opportunity to try.
Martie
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6 posted 2001-05-01 03:55 PM


Congratulations, Michael!!!  Thank you for the gift of your poetry and all your sweet replies....and especially, for friendship! Hugs!
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7 posted 2001-05-01 04:16 PM


So right you are, but the part you share is enough to keep me coming back here.

"They're only just a part of me.
There's so much more you'll never know."

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8 posted 2001-05-01 04:46 PM


Very nice.  I particularly your different rhyme scheme. abba.  Joyce
elizabeth anne
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9 posted 2001-05-01 05:42 PM


Michael,

Congrats on your one thousandth post and I'm happy to say that I personally know that precious heart that beat within our times.  You're a wonderful man, friend and poet.  

Elizabeth Anne

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10 posted 2001-05-01 05:48 PM


Congs on your 1000th post I've been reading your poetry since you cam here at the passions enjoy as always
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11 posted 2001-05-01 06:58 PM


It's more than the words Michael. . . it's the poet behind the words. . . and that's what makes them different. . .

Well done my friend. . . and congratulations. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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12 posted 2001-05-01 07:16 PM


Congrat on your 1000th post! Thanks for all your wonderful words.
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13 posted 2001-05-02 03:33 AM


1,000 poems of just word!  I think not an ordinary happening as they were YOUR words, and those are some of the finest from one of the purest souls I have met for a very long time.  Here is to many thousands more, as they are golden treasures each and every one, filled with wisdom and love.  Congratulation Auguste!

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2001-05-02 05:10 AM


"These words are but a tiny part
of what it takes to make the whole.
The bath I use to cleanse the soul.
My medicine to aid the heart. "

This is such a beautiful poem for all writers Michael ... wonderful depth within these lines, and the cadence and rhyme scheme is superb! Excellent writing!  
Congratulations on 1,000 posts ... it's been a pleasure reading your poetry and responses. Onward to 2,000!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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15 posted 2001-05-02 08:35 AM


Congratulations!    On with the next thousand!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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16 posted 2001-05-03 12:23 PM


CONGRATS 
on 1000


here's to 1000
more....this is lovely Michael, but then again all your  work is....


 


 


Greeneyes~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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17 posted 2001-05-03 12:30 PM


You have said it so much better than I.
Auguste
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18 posted 2001-05-03 01:52 AM


Everyone,

I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate your wonderful words of support.  I couldn't ask for a better group of friends and fellow writers.  I sincerely thank you all.  You're the best.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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