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RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2001-03-27 02:36 PM

Never?

Your words enchant till darkest nights
Are bright with parenthetic smiles
And commas spiraling off to form
A universe where all believe.
And so, dear friend, you must not worry
If I profess that I can see
A kind of love unknown to thee.
Look up,
I'm sure you'll find where it could be;
Perhaps that far, right
Galaxy.

RMW

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-03-27 03:09 PM

I like the sound of this. It works magic to the ear.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2001-03-27 03:27 PM

My, but this is good, delicious.

Corinne

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2001-03-27 03:40 PM

Songbird....thank you. I appreciate that. Bob

Corinne....Kind words again. Thanks much. Bob

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

4 posted 2001-03-27 05:33 PM

*smiling*

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2001-03-27 06:07 PM

applause!!!

... the whole write, well worthy of recognition.... i especially liked

"parenthetic smiles"

and
"Look up,
I'm sure you'll find where it could be;
Perhaps that far, right
Galaxy"

of course, i could quote the whole poem... but since you wrote it, you probably already read it.... lol....

nice work. very well done!

-There is no Devil. Just God when He drinks. - Tom Waits

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 03-27-2001).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-03-27 06:31 PM

good poem

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-03-27 06:34 PM

wonderful Bob. . . you have a way with saying a lot in a little space. . . I like that. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

8 posted 2001-03-27 07:10 PM

Just A Woman, Doreen Peri, Vandana, and Sven,...thank you all for reading and commenting on this. Bob

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-03-28 05:26 AM

This is a well written poem and expresses much imagery......

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

10 posted 2001-03-28 11:58 AM

enjoyed,, never say never .. eh

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

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