Open Poetry #13 |
Senior Moment |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I just now had a little thought, that very swiftly sped away. They have named them senior moments. I seem to have some every day. I'm stumbling and I'm stammering, wondering what is going wrong. Guess my brain is overloaded. It has been working overlong. I try to introduce a friend. I simply can't recall her name. When I thnk of it at midnght, it's way too late and not the same. My friend doesn't seem to notice. She acts as if all is quite fine. Unbothered I forgot her name, she's trying to remember mine. by Joyce 3/26/01 [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 03-26-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL At what age do we start calling them Senior Moments???? Good one Joyce!!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I just love this. I'm tired of it being called my MENOPAUSAL MOMENT. Can't wait till I'm able to call it my "Senior Moment". |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Crack me up! Good write. |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Joyce, This is perfect and I loved the twist at the end. Panne |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is very clever Joyce. You're not alone in those "senior moments" you know! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Running hard to catch up with my fleeting senior moment, but I had to stop and tell you how delightful yours is. Many smiles. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
LOL I have been having those moments so long, but finally now I have an excuse for them! I will never forget your face, but please don't ask me to remember your name!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It wasn't bad enough being blonde... now aging has to "help"!!! LOL. I loved this, Joyce! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I like to think of it as selective recall---- very witty writing joyce-- thanks for the chuckle.. Jamie |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
This was terrific...you have managed to weave humor, bittersweetness and reflection into an otherwise sad situation...I loved the ending where your friend is trying to remember your name too...this gives the sense of sharing, supporting and understanding between senior friends during these moments. Jellybean King |
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