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Mabel A. Dilley
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0 posted 2001-05-01 11:00 AM

skyblue pink haze flows
water silently scallops
tangled woven shore

"I am not now that which I have been."

RMW
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1 posted 2001-05-01 11:18 AM

Julian...soothing...yet thought provoking. Bob

Sunshine

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2 posted 2001-05-01 12:06 PM

perfect title...presentation...and left behind feelings...

well done!

Joyce Johnson

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3 posted 2001-05-01 12:25 PM

Beautiful words. Joyce

Mysteria

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4 posted 2001-05-01 12:36 PM

Whooo Hoooo!

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-05-01 12:53 PM

picture and poem both picture perfect!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-05-01 01:17 PM

nature haikus rule yuh yuh

Auguste

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By the sea

7 posted 2001-05-01 01:39 PM

Julian,

I need to learn how to write these, or at least learn how to say so much in so few words.

Well done.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

8 posted 2001-05-01 04:35 PM

Thank you all for sitting by the lake with me where silent pondering soothes a mind and memories flow like glass.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-05-01 07:22 PM

Julian~
Oh ... you'd have to KNOW I love this one.
Great Grandmother's favorite saying ...
'Sky Blue Pink...With A Dot In The Middle'

This is delightful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vandana

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10 posted 2001-05-02 05:53 PM

liked it

VAS
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11 posted 2001-05-02 06:28 PM

Beautiful photo and your creative accompaniment!

Songbird
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12 posted 2001-05-02 06:32 PM

I really like. You paint a lovely picture to match the photo.

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

13 posted 2001-05-03 02:32 PM

Thank you all so very much for supporting my poetic trails. I must admit I stole the title, A Sky Blue Pink, from an old works by Maxim Gorky. So thanks to the inspiration should go to him.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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