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Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

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Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-30 10:33 AM

moist dew on her lips
golden door opens slowly
symbol of friendship

Graphics: Picture.Com
Music: midiworld; affair
in San Miguel

"I am not now that which I have been."

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-04-30 10:53 AM

Love the picture and yes it is like lips slowly opening.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-30 11:02 AM

But Julian....it looks like a golden bird! How beautiful...all of it...yes, all of it!

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-04-30 12:03 PM

A beautiful picture for your descriptive poem. Joyce

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-05-01 07:18 PM

I'm a night time girl myself, but this is lovely

Sandra

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-05-01 08:48 PM

wonderful Julian. . . soft and sweet. . .

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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-05-01 11:07 PM

Julian~
Karilea saw what I saw ...
A beautiful poem ...
with a beautiful gold dove !

WONDERFUL !
~*Marge*~

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JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-05-01 11:15 PM

What an image you have created!

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2001-05-02 12:30 PM

I really loved this, graphics music, and a sweet morning kiss.

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

9 posted 2001-05-02 12:38 PM

beautiful dove of peace, opening it's pedals slowly LP

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

10 posted 2001-05-02 01:05 AM

Thank you so much. We are all in agreement: golden flower opening showered with morning dew; shaped like a dove, the symbol of peace and friendship. You had me worried there for a moment...

"I am not now that which I have been."

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-05-02 02:49 AM

Glad I came on late in behind you, and I was sure that was an abstract bird at first, and then I remembered your sign - the dove! Way to go, this was awesome just like you - what a great presentation Mabel, the dew on the petals and finding the dove shaped flower - just awesome!

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kaile

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singapore

12 posted 2001-05-02 12:11 PM

very nice presentation!

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

13 posted 2001-05-03 02:34 PM

Mysteria and faterider: thank you so very much. The picture begged for a haiku.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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