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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-05-01 10:32 AM


The following poem was written to meet a challenge to write to a painting.  After school today, I will try to copy the painting to this message so you may see it.

Saroya Tosses Me
Virginia Salter

stunned here
under the stars
caught up in the piece of it all
the prairie sprawled out below me
across the river
beyond the hills
that have always tried to keep us apart
yet, they had no power
until that horrendous hour
when your lips bade me farewell
your heart, in its spell,
left for the arms of another
now, in the middle of my last ride
from the caress of your tenderness
the sweetness of your crimson lips
I contemplate the worth of it all
without you
life is so very small
reduced to gnatdom
is my kingdom
swallowed up
wallowed up in these tears
that do not fall
to even moisten the sand
with memories of you
for they have dried
in desert winds of your heart
having cast me aside
as tumbleweeds
in Saroya

©May 1, 2001

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 05-03-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-01 12:58 PM


enjoyed, and by the way, thank you for the big wording, I only see out of one eye and this made it a joy to read!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
2 posted 2001-05-01 04:45 PM


This was written with gentle grace.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
3 posted 2001-05-01 04:48 PM


I enjoyed this very much.  Joyce
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