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Magic Rose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Magic Rose Gleaming out a chameleon bower, Showering colors, of separate shower, A blue rose, red rose, white rose light, Eloquence, of a rose in sight. While forming dew, on petals' new, Run down to where the nettle grew. Colors devouring, in passions bright, Sensual variations, of its flight, Tribute dower, of rose power, This fantasy, for the hour. And I touched it oh so tender, In the gentlest, of surrender. Whatever its goal, I lost control, My surrender, of both heart and soul, Showing its white and reds and blues, These moods, of magic color hues. The mystery, of the roses might, The sensuous shocking lime rose light. I placed it, in my ivory tower, A rose encaged, with all its power, To visit it, each lonely night, This blue rose, red rose, white rose light. I revel, in its magic glade And pray this rose, should never fade. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) With such a sweetness your words have, this rose will never fade but only glow brighter! (sigh) I loved the imagery in this beautiful piece, roses are indeed very inspiring and magic to me for they always remind me of my dream lover when I am seduced by it's sweet smell. (sigh) I love this poem so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sometimes it can be hard to write about a rose, you did this very well and very original too, I might add! Kathleen Blake |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My goodness sy, sometimes I wish I could borrow your brain for fifteen minutes just so I could meander through such a fabulous place! This is indeed, MAGICAL.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mislletoe, Thank you so much and may love and light continue to shine on you. Irish, Thank you Kathleen. Serenity, Thank you for the magical. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I touched it oh so tender, In the gentlest, of surrender. Whatever its goal, I lost control, My surrender, of both heart and soul, Showing its white and reds and blues, These moods, of magic color hues. The mystery, of the roses might, The sensuous shocking lime rose light. I placed it, in my ivory tower, A rose encaged, with all its power, To visit it, each lonely night, This blue rose, red rose, white rose light. I revel, in its magic glade And pray this rose, should never fade. ================== oh how thy mind's garden grows ... when thee writes of thy rose of suppose.    *winkiewinkie*  meThough my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This magic rose that dew doth kiss forever imparts to me sweet, sweet gifts... this is wonderful Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Sweet Tinkerbell, you had all the roses of suppose. Love WW S Sunshine, THank you for the wonderful. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This piece is remarkably lovely ....  Deserves such a flowering of the Peppermint Twist~ You are so talented, my friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, I have been at a lost for words of late but this is truly awe inspiringly beautiful, thank you so much for sharing, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
This is beautiful. With such gentleness you write. You capture much, with this poem. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
HJow gentle the flower, how gentle the poet. Joyce |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Almost as lovely as you. *L* Cerenity, Thank you so much for being a loyal reader. Tessa, A wonderful comment, thank you. Joyce, How gentle the comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you for sharing this magic with us, Seymour... it's beautiful! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very beautiful Sy....a brilliant write! Nathan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...The petal soft of rose divine is captured well within your rhyme!! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is so lovely! Cor |
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