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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

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0 posted 2001-04-24 07:37 PM

I, weary,

I write before I, weary,
rest
but not enough

Perhaps the cave,
pressed against the wall

Sunrise . . . Sunset . . .
Sunrise . . . Sunset . . .

The last monks of
the Chunguaching
knew?



Krawdad    4.24.01

Brad Majors

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1 posted 2001-04-24 07:44 PM

I love this! Very original!

Poet deVine

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2 posted 2001-04-24 08:57 PM

Congratulations on 500 posts!!!

Temptress

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3 posted 2001-04-24 09:07 PM

Interesting poem. Congratulations on your 500th post.

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2001-04-25 12:31 PM

e........no wonder your weary.....500 posts...WOW OHHHHHHHH WOW....giggle......congrats my shadow,,,,,,,CONGRATS......h

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2001-04-25 12:36 PM

Congrats....I love the imagery of Dante'--is reflection reality or vice versa? Happy 500 lovie, glad you found a home here.

Interloper

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6 posted 2001-04-26 03:07 PM

Congrats on #500. I don't know if they knew, heck ... I can't even pronounce it

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Krawdad
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7 posted 2001-04-29 01:32 AM

Thanks all for stopping by!

Brad,
When there is a bunch of stuff ricochetting all around in your head, it can be that way.

PdeV, Temptress,
Thanks for the congrats.

Lady,
Thanks, from your shadow.

Serenity,
Well, Plato did come to mind, but Dante? Yes, some days at least, it is nice to be here.

Interloper,
I think I spelled it right (can't find that book!). In any case, it is a mountain range in central China, a last stand of sorts, for hermit monks in China.

Krawdad
/:-}==
=#===

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-05-01 04:01 PM

keep writing, and congratulations!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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Joyce Johnson

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9 posted 2001-05-01 04:59 PM

Nice little poem and congratulations. Joyce

Sunshine

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10 posted 2001-05-01 05:23 PM

Way to go, Krawdad...this slipped by me. Glad to see it popped back up! Congrats on a very interesting piece!

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