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gremlin
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since 2001-04-18
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0 posted 2001-05-01 10:05 AM


Test Of Faith.

Before you is the very voice of God.
Are you not scared, still standing up?
Well get down on your bended knees.
Thy shall be saved who follows this;
Close your eyes and shed a tear for Christ who's dead.
Who never made it to the heaven and was caught in the Devil's net.
If your eyes are wet then you felt the fear.
The poem ends for you right here.

If your eyes were open and you were having fun.
You haven't felt my pain for losing son.
Then life not poem will end for you right here.
Scream all you want I can not hear.
You'll die for devil in the fear.


05/01/2001

Hope your eyes were wet. Just kidding. Don't take this personally. Just approach it from poetic point of view.
Love and Peace to everybody.

Best Regards,
Stan

[This message has been edited by gremlin (edited 05-01-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Stanislav Skobelskiy - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-05-01 10:12 AM


No, I didn't take it personally from you. I took it personally when presented by God.
Thank you for the eye opener this morning.

gremlin
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since 2001-04-18
Posts 25
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2 posted 2001-05-01 06:53 PM


its for effect
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