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The Bridge of Tomorrow... InspiredBySerenity
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The Bridge of Tomorrow... InspiredBySerenity |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
The Bridge of Tomorrow ~~~~~~~~~~~~*coco*~~~~~~~~~~~~ The rain beats fast Against the window pane And I find myself Tripping over and over again In moments of remembering The darkeness of yesterday...  The stains remain Bittersweet in taste Of tears that crawled Along delicate pores Of ivory flesh Trembling in silence On eyelet pillowcase And peaking through These pages blue I speak of love Pure and true No longer running Or hiding in fear From the cloak of shadow That once lurked near With strength of family And trusting friend The journey was taken Where fear is foresaken Without any trace Leaving no trail Across the bridge of tomorrow Where new beginnings unfold... This is inspired by the poem "OPEN DOOR", written by Serenity A sweetNtalented PoetFriend Hugs2Ualways |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
coco....I am so touched...right down to the mention of "eyelet"---I've more than a few of eyelet button down blouse--how incredibly you have touched my heart, and thank you can never be enough. "Hand-over-heart-bow" to you! Your words brought healing to me, I thank you. Much love to you. |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Serenity, it is I who thank you for the many times you share of yourself with all of us here and you innocently through words on screen open doors to new beginnings ya know sweetie I speak this true and for this dearPoetFriend, I treasure you... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And peaking through These pages blue I speak of love Pure and true No longer running Or hiding in fear From the cloak of shadow That once lurked near With strength of family And trusting friend The journey was taken Where fear is foresaken Without any trace Leaving no trail Across the bridge of tomorrow Where new beginnings unfold... ========================= this is a beautiful poetic reply to sens poem and HEY YOU!!!! WELCOME BACK!!!  how cool to see your name here again sweet poet!!!! youve been missed  Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LaCocoBaciBaby~ You KNOW I'm glad to see you here !  What a loving, thoughtful inspiration piece this is~ Is this the greatest inspirational joint on the boulevard or what ? *Hugs* sent your way BIG TIME ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco........formerly known as CocoBaci  It's wonderful to have you back sweet poet!! SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Nice poem, Coco. Mostly I must say I'm glad I have my sanity. It showed this was your first post and yet I was certain a Coco was here before. In reading the comments, my composure was regained. Welcome back! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wonderful, wonderful Coco....so good to see you again. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coco I enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
To all of you dearPoetFriends, I thank you kindly for your warmhearted replies and you can't imagine how elated I am to be able to return here today, to this home of sweetNgifted friends who I've come to know and grown fond of in ways that sometimes words fail me to express... Hugs2u |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Coco, I thank serenity for her inspiration and you for sharing such a lovely poem. Your imagery is wonderful, Coco. Michael Proust- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ah, new beginnings Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Auguste & Interloper -> merci beaucoup PoetFriends, it's always sweet to discover that you have dropped by... Smiles2uBoth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco, it is we who are elated to have you back. . . This is wonderful. . . absolutely wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
to beautiful new beginnings... |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
hiya SweetieSven thank you my dear PoetFriend... LatinPassion...nice of you to drop me a reply and yeah new beginnings are the best as they present exciting adventures |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Coco - I have seen in this poem just how inspired you were. It's just beautiful. BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful and hopefilled poem, coco...very mych enjoyed! |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
Very inspirational. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
I am running short on time today but do wish to convey to all of you who have come by this page to take a peak at a poem that our sweet friend Serenity had inspired that your comments in reply box warms my heart... Thank you so much PoetFriends for the light you bring in my life through your poetry and friendship is something I cherish each day... Muaah on cheeks *~coco~* |
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