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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-27 11:34 PM

quiet darkness falls
casting globe in twilight pall
sleep; to stir come Sol

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2001-04-27 11:42 PM

Stars have gone to bed
Cloudy blanket covers sky
Moon winks with a sigh

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-27 11:45 PM

I do believe that's a first I've seen from you!...well done!

and thanks for the read!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-04-28 12:22 PM

*

at Balladeer*,good one! Sunshine, don't let the bedbugs bite...they'll be back tomorrow night! That was so pretty! (hugs)

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-28 07:35 AM

Thank you Mysteria...but now Sol has stirred....

so guess who is back at it!

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

5 posted 2001-04-29 09:43 AM

In dark night we dream
For love to bring sweetest sleep
Waking in loves arms

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-04-29 09:48 AM

sleepy one....dreamy one....love it.

Charisma

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

7 posted 2001-04-29 11:57 AM

nights cocoon unfolds
releasing sleepy sunshine
breathing warmth, anew.

Good morning and good write I enjoyed

Regards,
Olias.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-05-01 01:17 AM

Fantastic senyru, Sunshine, encompasses sleep and it end so well!

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

9 posted 2001-05-01 01:17 PM

that aint no regular senryu no way o yuh

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

10 posted 2001-05-01 02:19 PM

Karilea,

You are one of my favorite poets here and this is why. Thanks! :-)

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

11 posted 2001-05-01 02:35 PM

Night has ruled the sky,
With dreams and pale moonbeams,
Till opens our eyes.

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

12 posted 2001-05-01 04:18 PM

Wonderful.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

13 posted 2001-05-01 04:44 PM

Well put Joyce

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

14 posted 2001-05-01 07:02 PM

Sunshine- I love this one is peaceful and offers hope.

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