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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-05-01 06:48 AM




On Pillowed Thoughts
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Tomorrow I will see you, as always,
in my return to morning dreams.

I will hold the look in your eyes,
as they shared in my depths.

Knowing I couldn't reach the heart of them,
with the heart of mine, has left me numb,

almost silent of thought and all I can do now
is replay, what I thought once was.

Forever, I will feel the pain, that touches me now,
as words fail to reach me, to hold me,

the notes to your charm missing,
reminders of others always rising,

halting my every forward move, and
secrets circulating in my head.

Spinning, with dizzying effect,
I leave here once again,

to lay on pillowed thoughts ...
of only you.


~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-01-2001).]

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RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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1 posted 2001-05-01 02:06 PM


Wynter...I wonder why the simplicity of this has not brought other comments. Hmmmm. HELLO??? Oh, well. I like it.  Bob
latin passion
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2 posted 2001-05-01 02:21 PM


so dreamy, I too dream of past times to. LP
Sven
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3 posted 2001-05-01 07:23 PM


the solace that only a pillow can bring. . .

excellent Maureen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-05-01 08:23 PM


nakdthouhts - to lie my head on the same pillow, h'mmmmmmmm........

BC

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-05-01 10:48 PM


Bob
I sometimes wonder why mine have to almost disappear first before being caught by anyone...it could be timing........or could be I am not in the loop that is closer on here..I pretty much  try to keep to myself..I feel as long as I am happy with my writing  that is all that matters.. thank you  very much for your kind words..huggzzz
~Wynter

latin passion
oh these aren't really past, yet..I am trying to prevent it from being so...by sleeping on it.....
thank you  



Sven
yes  I have my  favorite one and only with that one  can I dream my wishes
  thank you for the excellent Sven  


BC
a pillow for two...thoughts to entwine..I love the idea Bill  

thank you all
~Wynter in  Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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