Open Poetry #13 |
On Pillowed Thoughts... |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
On Pillowed Thoughts ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tomorrow I will see you, as always, in my return to morning dreams. I will hold the look in your eyes, as they shared in my depths. Knowing I couldn't reach the heart of them, with the heart of mine, has left me numb, almost silent of thought and all I can do now is replay, what I thought once was. Forever, I will feel the pain, that touches me now, as words fail to reach me, to hold me, the notes to your charm missing, reminders of others always rising, halting my every forward move, and secrets circulating in my head. Spinning, with dizzying effect, I leave here once again, to lay on pillowed thoughts ... of only you. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Wynter...I wonder why the simplicity of this has not brought other comments. Hmmmm. HELLO??? Oh, well. I like it. Bob |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
so dreamy, I too dream of past times to. LP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the solace that only a pillow can bring. . . excellent Maureen. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthouhts - to lie my head on the same pillow, h'mmmmmmmm........ BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bob I sometimes wonder why mine have to almost disappear first before being caught by anyone...it could be timing........or could be I am not in the loop that is closer on here..I pretty much try to keep to myself..I feel as long as I am happy with my writing that is all that matters.. thank you very much for your kind words..huggzzz ~Wynter latin passion oh these aren't really past, yet..I am trying to prevent it from being so...by sleeping on it..... thank you Sven yes I have my favorite one and only with that one can I dream my wishes thank you for the excellent Sven BC a pillow for two...thoughts to entwine..I love the idea Bill thank you all ~Wynter in Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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