Open Poetry #13 |
Dear Lord |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Dear Lord some news came my way, Dear Lord, a friend who called to say she “had a problem today” Dear Lord her voice was strong it did not shake it left my heart resembling aftermaths of small earthquakes Dear Lord her problems, tremendous, but she called to share, she said “you may have to pick it up from here” and laid a responsibility on my door Dear Lord I will take it on and more but for a moment I faltered questioned my strength for I would go to any length to not let this friend down; but for a moment I faltered and questioned abilities and I asked Dear Lord can You see me through this give me a sign that I can take this load and make it mine Dear Lord then, He took my hand to write a note to a friend who would lend an ear not for advice no, just to share a burden given who would also care Dear Lord Miracles Happen the friend wrote back said “you have strength and that I have always seen; you have abilities yet to tap ~ you can live a dream, “you are able to carry on for your friend, and you you have my support you have my love in all that you shall do.” Dear Lord Miracles Happen Dear Lord You took a vessel of Your love to share Your words on wing of dove to take Your gifts and remind of Your plan that You have, for woman and man for in our strengths even when in doubt You give one voice a reason to shout “I have faith in you,” and in Your love, You find one to share with those who falter a bit, a word, some comfort, and that lift Dear Lord thank You for all Your Miracles and for the voices that You pass them through. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lady In LWhite you hae a tender heart, and God will help. Sad but beautiful poem. Joyce |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lady this is outstandingly beautiful. and Yes YOU have strength. Truly beautiful, always you write things that lift me and this does love Take care love as always Puck Thank you today I have much need of this Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I know the Bible says "bear one another's burdens" but sometimes people can drain us. This reminded me of that verse. Kathleen Blake |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
well written verses those who search the face of the lord are rewarded in the most unlooked for ways |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
beautiful prayer. The lord will help those who ask it of him. I really liked this. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
That's it! Go right to the top of the chain of command and leave those foot soldiers of doubt and destruction behind. Truly an awesome piece. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lady in White, This is heartfelt and a faith boost. What timing you display. I needed to hear this. Thank you. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this Dear Lord, "let the day bring happiness" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I like Julian's response, and we all have that place in us of hidden strength - just tap into it when someone needs you. It is a special gift we are given to help others when called upon and you will do it, as "ask and it shall be given". Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you for this. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady--How amazing to think of the vehicles of His love...sometimes in such simple things as a listening ear...we are able to see what was there all along. Hugs! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This entire poem is great but for me I'll hang on the summation I really love: "thank You for all Your Miracles and for the voices that You pass them through." I love how you write [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very soft "yes" and a tear in my eye........beautiful Lady On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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