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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-04-29 03:22 PM

              “A LOVE POEM FOR YOU”
                            by
                        Bill Charles
                           ~~~~
You are so very precious, and gratifyingly attractive,
      perhaps it’s the way your eyes,
            look at mine with caring…
They sparkle and speak to me, in many of loves words,
      and pierces through to my heart,
            as I feel them, seducing…

Your touch is soft, like a summer morn’s gentle breeze,
      I can feel it on my face,
            and it finds its way within…
It awakens my senses, tingling me with many delights,
      and I feel the warmth, wanting it,
            as you I’ve know before, and there I have been…

So this I say to you, “I pledge myself, the way I am,
      nothing phony, and don’t want to be perfect,
            just plain ole me, is what you get…
And in return all I ask is the same, no more, no less,
      for soul mates we will become,
            on this I would make a bet”…

These words I write only for you, but if you don’t mind,
      I will share them in this poem,
            but don’t fear, for you will always be…
That very precious someone, that I found out of nowhere,
      and you will always, forever, and a day,
            be deep inside, of me…
                       ~~~~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-29 03:31 PM

This is a wonderful poem for someone special! I see you updated your picture, as many have, good to see and read you again!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-04-29 03:36 PM

bill...this is so beautiful....you are so romantic!!!! helen

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-04-29 10:00 PM

so beautifully stated - it makes my heart soar with delight. For I to hope I passed the test; one that was probably required. For my teacher, he is my pen, and I'm just mearly the paper he writes on. I'm running out of room and for all to see..., but they've been there for you; while riding out the storm, so I quite agree and fully understand. You have written a beautiful token, and not to be taken lightly...thank you from the bottom of my heart. LP

[This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 04-30-2001).]

Amuse_mi
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since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

4 posted 2001-04-29 10:37 PM

I hope she is really real...!! I am happy for you...both.

A.M.

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-04-29 11:11 PM

What a loving heart you must have, to write such beautiful love poems. Joyce

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-04-29 11:33 PM

Thank you for sharing an intimate part of your life with your special lady, this was very lovely.

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-30 01:12 PM

Bill, if I ever write as half as good as this, then I'll be doing well. . . this is really excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2001-04-30 11:57 PM

ohhh sigh~ such tenderness, and love from your heart pen....lovely...

Lauren~

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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

9 posted 2001-05-01 11:10 AM

A beautiful, giving love poem, Bill.

Corinne

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

10 posted 2001-05-01 03:03 PM

You have well captured the gift of love. Beautiful, Bill!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

11 posted 2001-05-01 08:53 PM

BC- I came to this poem several times, saying to myself - WHAT A BEAUTIFUL GESTURE AND TOKEN SAID & UNSAID LOVE. The outpour of love as much as he expressed, she could be so lucky, HOPEFUL it be me. How could these eyes been so blind? "Three Little Words" were never taken lightly. As we walk hand in hand. My life will weave with yours. As you have said it, now feel it...I Love you...LP

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2001-05-02 11:20 AM

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