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Moment With You
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Moment With You |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sometimes in the dark like this I get a desire for you like this Want to feel, want to feel your kiss Don’t want to lose out on so much bliss Things I need to learn so much Have to feel, to feel your touch Never will it be too much Gracing me with your saving touch With you I know all With you when darkness falls I don’t heed anyone else’s call Time to stop, time to end it all I need to stop it fast Need to make this moment last |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
One nearly always wants to hang on to those wondrous moments. Well expressed PK |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Things I need to learn so much Have to feel, to feel your touch Never will it be too much Gracing me with your saving touch With you I know all With you when darkness falls I don’t heed anyone else’s call Time to stop, time to end it all ======================== ya know this is moth poem just waiting to happen *L* beautiful poetic phrasing and express of longing and desire PK... your poetry at is best in my humble opinion. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Um, Janet Marie has it quite right...a lot of intense feeling here...it speaks well... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
When the darkness falls over New Orleans those feeling just take hold. Beautiful write. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
If only we could stop the moments...and stay right there. |
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