Open Poetry #13 |
Threads of Life |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
A web of life is woven in time, Different threads are desired to complete it, Hope, much loved of all threads- Is selected the most, Today I can’t locate it, How must I finish this web? I wait for proposals- From others like me, chaos fetches his favorite thread, peace not far back advises a few, violence twines within my work, devil comes with his metallic red, Now the web is absolute, all the votes accounted for, now begins a new one, hope lost once more. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like this alot yuh hope lost is a great theme and its woven well in this write! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes this is good. I hope you can weave Hope into your next one. Love Joyce |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
for the next one, hope will "hopefully" not die. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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