Open Poetry #13 |
A Journey Through A Writer's Eyes |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
My mind, it is a canvas I paint, not with a brush, but with my words I may be describing my beautiful garden Or the vivid colors of the birds Only a glimpse do you see through my writing Of the reality that everyday I see But know that all that I write about Comes from the heart and soul of me It doesn't matter what it is I am writing You will see the image right from my eyes I'm hoping all the poems about my garden Bring the beauty right before your eyes From the colors I describe in my flowers To the fairies roaming through my garden bed And the dew that glistens like diamonds As a spiral around the spider's web I just hope that I paint a real picture That I take you on a journey of delight And I hope that the images I portray to you Will stay with you throughout the day and night Suetang |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well aren't you sweet. You do paint pretty pictures and they will leave a lasting impression. Joyce |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Joyce Thanks for your kindness and constant encouragement.....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ What a sincere, from-the-heart write. 'My mind, it is a canvas I paint, not with a brush, but with my words' Well ... you sure painted a lovely keeper here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is lovely... wonderful imagery and cadence blended to paint for us the vision you wish to convey.. all wrapped up in a sincere message... well done There are two lasting bequests |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Sue, you do write from the heart and this is one thing I really like about your poetry. You have a wonderful way of weaving ideas which tends to bring your words to life. It is a pleasure to know you and watch your writing get better and better. Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your constant encouragement and inspiration. I feel such warmth here and would like to think I have made some lovely friends through my writing. Sue Suetang |
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