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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-04-29 10:58 PM


The taxi driver beeps his arrival
As a new day begins to dawn
The noise, it hardly registers
As I'm feeling so forlorn

With my suitcase in my hand
I open the passenger door
As the weather turns so nasty
And the rain begins to pour

The driver tries to talk to me
He has so much to say
But my mind is filled with sadness
On this dark and dreary day

After an hour we reach the airport
I pay my fare and close the door
As reality finally hits me
I won't be seeing your face anymore

I thought we'd be together
Forever and a day
To your charms I once surrendered
Now I feel that I can't stay

Your heart no longer loves me
Does it belong to someone else?
How lost and so alone I feel
Like I've been left upon the shelf

So many happy faces I see
Going to destinations unknown
While my mind begins to wonder
Where will be the next place I'll call home?

No love is living here for me
It deserted me this day
I just wish this was all a dream
That you'd come and take me away

"Flight QF2 is now boarding
At gate number nine"
I pick up my suitcase and coat
As I stand here silently in line

Then a voice I hear, so familiar
A voice that I surely knew
As I turn around disbelievingly
I see that the voice I hear is you

You tell me that you love me
You tell me, please don't go
As you throw your arms around me
Should I stay or should I go?

Suetang

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-29 11:00 PM


Oh Dear I don't know enough about this situation to advise, but this is a nice heartfelt poem that touched me.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-29 11:04 PM


Stay...if there are any doubts, stay and find out why there is no definatitive (sp) answer for you.


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-04-30 03:01 AM


SueTang~
You stay !
There are always other flights ...
but maybe not other arms to hold you
and tell you that you are loved.

Stay !

Well done ...
I felt I was part of it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ethan Halo
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4 posted 2001-04-30 05:57 AM


an excellent story in rhyme! well told, well penned...
and like the rest of 'em said...there's always a later flight...

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2001-04-30 06:17 PM


Thanks for the advice.  I think I'll stay.

Suetang

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