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Open Poetry #13

Of Silver and Gold

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-04-30 02:29 PM

Of Gold and Silver

silver stardust
filtering through my mind
moonbeam memories
of dancing on rose petals
from dusk until dawn's first light

reminding me
of a golden moment
in my past.

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-04-30 02:52 PM

moonbeam memories
of dancing on rose petals
from dusk until dawn's first light
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striking imagery achieved in pure poetic succinctity..
this is lovely, both the poem and the presentation
well done

There are two lasting bequests
that we can hope to instill in our children
one is roots ...
the other ... wings.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-04-30 03:07 PM

I do love your poem, the beauty of the rose.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-04-30 03:58 PM

A beautiful union of poetry, memories, photography and your soul, very lovely.

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Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-30 06:15 PM

wonderful!!!

I love this. . . just a wonderful presentation. . .

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