Open Poetry #13 |
Kathleen at 39 |
Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
The numbness moved From arm to fingers To hips, to linger In parts without warn- Each day a different ache. Yet, I spied Beneath her stoop Within her ancient eyes A glimpse of youth Days of joy and play Now spurned in deadness. Courting an aged man Attached and wealthy A man called "Red" Who bought her cigarettes And paid her rent It was how she graced her day. I loved her then And bade my time Playing bartender friend While she whittled Onward toward end. And in our bar She cried aloud Her bellowed shun Through old refrains Of "The House of the Rising Sun" Yet, still, in her eyes The ocean sang And banked her trade Of women in The Port of Angels. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a portrait well done. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Good character development within a small space. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You make us see her, poor thing. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AmuseMi~ I enjoyed this very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I know this isn't about me (wink) but thank you for acknowling my age!!!!! I intend to be 39 for the rest of my natural redheaded life and I'll cherish this little poem in my heart always Kathleen Blake |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Still trying to put it all together...enjoyed! |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
Sven, Julian, Joyce and Marge...thankyou for reading and the validation. Kathleen...sorry, not for you, maybe someday...after I know you well enough to attempt your beautiful essence! She was a redhead and gorgeous, too. JLR-This is maybe more about me than Kathleen. She was a woman I knew long ago who had MS and couldn't work. She had a tough time living off of disability with two children to feed and chose a tougher way to pay by selling parts of her soul to people who were more than willing to take advantage. Most would judge her or shun her, but I loved the beauty in her desire to sacrifice for her children all that she felt she could give. I have thought of her often- and her spirit and intent has lived with me always. The moral I guess is that seeing "into" people makes it easier to live with the actions we take that would instill in others a need to judge. I am not doing the sentiment justice. |
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