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First Love
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First Love |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Starlight saw me through the night Daylight saw me through the mist See me you through to my tomorrows when we’ll meet for our first kiss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Something to look forward to with romantic anticipation...James |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
So sweet and Beautiful. I'm going to add this to my Library!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Lovely! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Short and poetically sweet. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
sweet thought. joyce |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Sunshine , so happy to see ya and I loved reading your poem...I've always felt that a first love is one that we never seem to forget and as I read your poem I was reminded of that... Hugs2uDearPoetFriend |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karilea, Aren't "first kisses" the best? Loved this and the pretty painting.Michael Proust- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and we see thee thru thy gifted pen. this is succinct and superb... wonderful imagery done subtley and softly this is a lovely pearl for your poetic necklace  Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The beauty of "first" is that it is always first the next time too. Lovely my friend. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
A strawberry of a poem, short succulent satisfying and very moreish, I enjoyed. Regards, Olias. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James, a delightful comment, thank you... Library away, Brad!... Interloper...tanks!... PK...that's me...short... Thank you Joyce... Thank you Coco... Auguste...LOL...first Kisses...in the morning, afternoon, evening...why, I do think you are so right!... JM, you ARE the one for casting pearls...I'm just trying to catch up to you.... Mysteria, you are SO right... OLIAS, I do believe this is the first ever poem I've heard referred to as a strawberry, but I have to admit, it makes me hungry! thank you all! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine..... this is so romantic....the sweet sighing kind...love this! SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I just like this one ! Don't need a reason, do I ? Nah ... like it cause I just do ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And in the forest, park, while sitting on a swing. Hey, anywhere. :-) Proust- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
memories old and new. . . wonderful Sunshine. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
the promise of tomorrows - better than Starlight better than daylight or mist Lovely promise lovely premise lovely poem |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautifully romantic, Sunshine...ahh yes, first kisses...  sp  to be with you... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--you have sweetened the morning with this treasure...thank you. |
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NIAI Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 52 |
Your name is fitting indeed. You always brighten my days. Thanks |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Yes, your name does fit you. This is wonderful, reminded me of my own first love. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the first kiss, always to be remembered....this is lovely... Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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