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ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
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0 posted 2001-04-29 02:55 AM


““I Promise You”

You promised every day to me,
That it wouldn’t be this way,
I let myself believe you.
Because I couldn’t stand to hear you say,
That you don’t love me.

I stared into my heart,
Somehow just to see,
If everything was really gone,
That you felt for me.

I spent the night,
Awake in tears,
Over all the promises,
Through the years,
I love you hurt the worst.

I feel his heart against me,
And see you in his eyes,
His smile used to be yours,
Before we said goodbye.

His tiny hands are beautiful,
But your not hear to see,
The innocence will wear away,
And then where will you be,
For you son that loves you so.

You promise me you need us both,
But we sleep alone at night,
I only wish to hold you,
Could make everything all right.

I just need to see you,
And that look upon your face,
The part of you that loved me,
And has left without a trace,
And I’ll promise to let go.


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latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
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1 posted 2001-04-29 03:12 AM


My heart bleeds for you, on this journey you've undertaken.  Your writings are so moving, yet tears at my core. Keep writing with your poetry and let your friends be there for you. LP
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-29 09:27 AM


Sending prayers...that you find yourself, and a place for your son...in hearts that care.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-04-29 11:15 AM


Amber~
Such sad thoughts from you ...
Rejoice in that new son and let God take care of the rest of it, sweetie.

Congratulations, little mommy !
Hugs to you and your son ...
You both have someone special to love.

Drop me an e-mail ...
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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4 posted 2001-05-01 11:23 AM


Ahh, I can visualize the situation....I hope thing get better for you......and the poem was very nice.....peace!!

Nathan

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5 posted 2001-05-01 05:37 PM


welcome to passions nice poem
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