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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-04-28 07:46 PM

Heartbeats and Waves….

The
scenery
around
me has
changed…
the
waves
I look
upon
are now
fields of
green
blowing
in the
wind…
the
movement
the
same…
graceful,
yet concise

so
much
so
is the
rhythm
of my
heart…
though
now
loved
by
another,
my
pulse
undulates
in the
familiar
measure
of
when
I was
loved
by you…

Annie Lehberg
achildsheart
04-27-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-04-28 08:34 PM

WhispersCaress~
This is a very lovely render.

I would use your signature to describe what I felt in reading it~

'May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...'

Enjoyed.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-28 08:43 PM

Oh, this is not only good...but lovely, as well...

May I library it? Thank you! {~,^}

Coal Surrender
Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

3 posted 2001-04-29 07:47 AM

The sway of tall grass, its movement a sea of earthen life. Elegantly phrased, so enchanting!

Coal

[This message has been edited by Coal Surrender (edited 04-29-2001).]

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

4 posted 2001-04-29 07:52 AM

I like this very much a cosistency in change very interesting.

Regards,
Olias

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-29 07:55 AM

Oh my ... just lovely Whisper's Caress! What an amazing flow, and such tender and delicate sentiments, beautiful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-02 07:27 PM

I can feel the wind in this poem. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-05-03 02:36 AM

Your name caught my eye, and I am so very glad it did...you truly write as softly as a whisper, and this was a most descriptive and delightful read.

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http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

8 posted 2001-05-03 09:06 AM

One word-Beautiful-

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