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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-04-29 10:51 PM




Say it again please?
you convey it so well
be it love, be it lust
or condemning to hell
speak, painter of words
as I relax on a cloud
be it in silence,
or spoken aloud
stirring within
a thought or a rhyme
to be treasured as gold
trascending time
pour upon paper
the essence of you
wrapped neat in my mind
& kept ever new...

~Tier{R.T.}
5/99


© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-29 10:56 PM


How nice this is and how rhythmic.  I like it a lot.  Joyce
Tiersdin
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2 posted 2001-04-29 10:58 PM


*smiles*

Thank you, Joyce J!

*Hugs*

-Tier

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3 posted 2001-04-30 12:30 PM


what an exceptonal way to acknowledge the poets for their gifts you admire...very well written  
Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-04-30 12:53 PM


WOW! a comment from, Balladeer! I am indeed honored! *the lady bows*

Thank you!
*smiles*

~Tier

JLR
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5 posted 2001-04-30 01:28 AM


Impressed!  Well done...didn't know quite what to expect from the title.  
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-04-30 02:21 AM


a thought or a rhyme
to be treasured as gold
trascending time
pour upon paper
the essence of you
wrapped neat in my mind
& kept ever new...
======================

Exactly... this is the way poetry and an admired poets work inspires us.
very cool write T, and wonderful cadence.

There are two lasting bequests
that we can hope to instill in our children
one is roots ...
the other ... wings.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-04-30 02:44 AM


Tiersdin~
What a lovely lilting rhyme to this piece.

'pour upon paper
the essence of you
wrapped neat in my mind
& kept ever new...'


I thoroughly enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Tiersdin
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8 posted 2001-04-30 08:30 AM


*smiles*  Thank you, JlR, trust me, it impresses me when someone tells me they're impressed with something I've created!

I know what you mean, Janet M, hence the write! All of you here inspire me more than you know!

Thank you, Marge, I deeply appreciate your comment! *smiles*

-Tier



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9 posted 2001-04-30 01:08 PM


and you inspire us just as much Tier. . .  

this is wonderful!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

latin passion
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10 posted 2001-04-30 03:39 PM


You painted your poem so perfectly. LP
Corinne
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11 posted 2001-04-30 03:52 PM


Tier, awesome work - and ready for publication!

Corinne

Sunshine
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12 posted 2001-04-30 04:25 PM


quote:

be it in silence,
or spoken aloud
stirring within
a thought or a rhyme
to be treasured as gold
trascending time
pour upon paper
the essence of you
wrapped neat in my mind
& kept ever new...




Perfect!

suthern
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13 posted 2001-04-30 05:26 PM


Poetry adds so much to my life... and the poets here add so much to my heart. *S* This is a splendid tribute to their contributions! *S* Well done!
Wilfred Yeats
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14 posted 2001-05-01 10:37 AM


I'll siomply echo the words of those before me
Tiersdin
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15 posted 2001-05-03 09:05 AM


Thank you, Sven,Latin passion, Corrine,Sunshine, Suthern,& Wilfred, for your wonderful comments and sentiments. It wasn't until I looked back into the archives that I realized how many great comments that I've missed. Thank you all again!

*smiles*
-Tier

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