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One Click |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You said that you would write today, to watch my ICQ... And finally my reward was there, a chance to talk to you... It seemed that you were busy, but I still kept holding on... Then somewhere out in cyber space, you clicked and you were gone! I sent you back a message, just to say I wasn’t through... I didn’t get an answer, not a single word from you.... With hours passed, frustration mounts, the day will seem too long... And all I’ve thought about is just one click, and you were gone... The awful part is I don’t know if it was what you chose... Or maybe it was in the lines, sometimes that’s how it goes... But my poor heart is hurt, no matter where it all went wrong... it didn’t need rejection with that click, and see you gone! I guess I’ll have to find some other friends to ICQ... Then I won’t sit here, all alone, and wait so long for you... You’ve shown me our relationship was much more off than on... The next time that you message me, I’ll click, and you’ll be gone! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well good for you, but maybe you better wait for an explanation. This was a fun poem. Joyce |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Can't help but agree with Joyce, but I hope if it is to be your relationship will become stronger than a click. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...would I be off to say "pick up the phone?"...hope they weren't in a storm, and the power blew!... enjoyed! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunnyone~ this is great...understand the fustration  give the friend a chance to explain.....anything could have happened my computer has been freaking out a lot lately...maybe theirs is too |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - a poem full of feelings, and well done. I have completed Gyspy Queen and will post it today or tomorrow. BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Hi Joyce ~~~ yes.....that thought certainly did cross my mind!!! thank you!!! ~~~ Hi VAS ~~~ and I think you're right, but this day and age there is a whole lot of clicking going on. ~~~ Hi Sunshine ~~~ I hate telephones...it's easier to type, then they don't hear your nervous voice!!! ~~~ Hi SEA ~~~ Yes, I do agree, and dealing with computers can foul up the best of intentions. ~~~ Hi Bill ~~~ Will certainly look forward to that one! Just wanted to add a note and thank all for enjoying this and replying!! Don't worry, though...it was all in fun!!!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Whew!!!!! I am glad that it was all in fun. Computers are alot of fun and you certainly sound like you are enjoying yours. Ketch you later. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, Though sad, I do like the flow of this one and wish you my best. Hugs to you, my friend. Michael Proust- |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
Oh, the trial and tribulations of the cyber world! Neat poem. I think we all can relate. A.M. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
With one click we can communicate or disconnect with the world. Fun poem! [This message has been edited by walker (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh what a flow, what a message! Yes, sometimes it's easier to pick up the phone......you look beautiful by the way. Kathleen Blake |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Ariana... Yes, I have turned into a compaddict, but there are worse vices!!!! Thank you!!! Hi Michael... I will take those hugs with great pleasure, and thank you, my dear friend!! Hi Amuse_mi... Love your name!!! And I'm glad that this one is relative to a lot of us!! Ha!! Thanks!! Hi Walker... Just one little click... and we're either on or off!! It's a fun world with all the devices!!! Thank you!! Hi Irish Rose... Yes, the phone is easier, IF the person doesn't live half way around the world!!! Then it's back to good old ICQ!!! And thank you...........I thought you looked beautiful in your last post!!!!! Thank you all very much.....love you guys!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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