»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #13
»
Beyond the Windows of My Night
| Open Poetry #13 |
|
Beyond the Windows of My Night |
|
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
|
Beyond the Windows of My Night Outside my window the night sky filling up with stars, the moon disappearing on this eve, drifting, I hear the loneliness echoing in the expanse of the night. I feel no comfort from the covering of the dark. To be together even when apart is my desire. To hear the music of your voice is my want. To feel your every movement is my passion. To see your eyes resting upon mine is my delight. To feel your gaze through your touch is my fire. You have entered my heart through these eyes, haunting me, catching me offguard, many nights, in pillowed hold, unaware of the hidden longings within. You have woven my thoughts with yours, over and under, entwining, embracing every fiber of me, above and beyond, never to sleep without the want of you. As the stillness of the night settles in I am caught up in the pleasure of these thoughts. Of moments... lying there, in the warmth of your arms, my eyes watching as you sleep, closing mine to dream...there... beyond the windows of my night. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Wynter....It is so difficult to capture the intimate. That's why I stick to ships. Very well done. Bob |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bob, does that mean I captured the intimate?  thank you... ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, you have. . . and very well I might add. . . wonderful. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm not Bob, but you have done so superbly, and totally tastefully. Intimate, but behind the appropriate folds of a curtain that we as observers will not in any way violate the intimacy. This is a very tender, delicate write and a pleasure to read. It's almost a caressing experience. |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven Thank You for peeking beyond my window Virginia "It's almost a caressing experience." such a wonderful response ..thank you very much ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
||
|
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
You really captured the essence of 'want' here. Desire and need are interwoven as always, and you captured it all poetically perfect. |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Well done M, you express yourself beautifully. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I spend lots of my free time thinking of someone special...never wanting to be away...and enjoying every second together...perhaps I appreciate her so much because we rarely spend time together...James |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
hey friend, these kinds of thoughts could get you in trouble (we wish huh?) I love it. Kathleen Blake |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
