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Mabel A. Dilley
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0 posted 2001-04-28 12:53 PM



bloom not from my sight


under the cloak of sun's set


rather rise with dawn


walk onto heaven's pathway


rest in meadows of heather




"I am not now that which I have been."

© Copyright 2001 Mabel A. Dilley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-28 01:12 PM


Julian~
You captured me with -
'meadows of heather'
Stirring images of a lovely blooming moment.
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2001-04-28 03:56 PM


Very lovely write, Julian!  Great images!

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to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-04-28 04:29 PM


Julian,
Enjoyed the read.

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4 posted 2001-04-28 05:00 PM


Thjis is lovely, but you haven't found any meadows of heather in Washington have you?  If so please direct me.  Joyce
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5 posted 2001-04-28 05:08 PM


Julian....I liked it all....well done!
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6 posted 2001-04-28 05:37 PM


Very pretty, but watch your step now won't you - he he!  Lovely imagery in this nice picture Mabel.

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Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 2001-04-29 05:21 PM


Thank you all for reading and commenting.
Joyce: heather in abundance on Johnston Ridge, Mt. St. Helens.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2001-04-29 05:25 PM


Julian....
This is so beautifully written and I have a fondness for heather. The combination put a smile on my face...thank you for that!!!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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9 posted 2001-04-29 06:41 PM


I think I found my spot for the summer!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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