Open Poetry #13 |
She |
forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
In the shadows of the setting sun She lingers Waiting for he who holds the key She watches As he crosses the stepping stones She trembles Feeling in memory his gentle kiss She whispers All the love she has for him She breathes The scent of him a sweet arousal She lives For the touch of his hand She yearns For that moment in time when She knows He is all she needs, all she is She dreams |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
simply beautiful. i love this love ya jesse All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Each line can stand alone! Well done weave! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very nice, very expressive poem... Kathleen Blake |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
wonderful write Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ForeverNBlueJeans~ A lovely dream-like state to be in. Nicely presented. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like this vry much. So true to dreams. Joyce |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
at 3:00 am she probably wished she could dream. The quill hit home. LP |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Jesse...thanks Sunshine...thank you what a great compliment Irish Rose...thank you Bernie...thank you I appreciate you saying so Marge...dreaming is a gift...given to children...never lose that child inside Joyce...thank you latin...3am is a common time for me...dreamless LOL |
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