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forevernbluejeans
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0 posted 2001-04-28 03:16 AM


In the shadows of the setting sun
She lingers
Waiting for he who holds the key
She watches
As he crosses the stepping stones
She trembles
Feeling in memory his gentle kiss
She whispers
All the love she has for him
She breathes
The scent of him a sweet arousal
She lives
For the touch of his hand
She yearns
For that moment in time when
She knows
He is all she needs, all she is
She dreams

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Jesse Jaymz
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1 posted 2001-04-28 03:30 AM


simply beautiful.  i love this  
love ya
jesse

All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-28 07:47 AM


Each line can stand alone!  Well done weave!
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-04-28 09:26 AM


very nice, very expressive poem...

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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4 posted 2001-04-28 12:35 PM


wonderful write
Bernie  

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Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-04-28 02:31 PM


ForeverNBlueJeans~
A lovely dream-like state to be in.
Nicely presented.
~*Marge*~

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Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2001-04-28 02:35 PM


I like this vry much.  So true to dreams.  Joyce
latin passion
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7 posted 2001-04-28 03:56 PM


at 3:00 am she probably wished she could dream. The quill hit home. LP
forevernbluejeans
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8 posted 2001-05-06 12:31 PM


Jesse...thanks

Sunshine...thank you what a great compliment

Irish Rose...thank you

Bernie...thank you I appreciate you saying so

Marge...dreaming is a gift...given to children...never lose that child inside

Joyce...thank you

latin...3am is a common time for me...dreamless LOL

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