Open Poetry #13 |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Never In all my life Have I felt love like this Passion, desire, consuming me Never |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful cinquain, very few have had the chance to feel this way, you express it perfectly~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you did this wonderfully! SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Nice write, Never ending.. Bernie a smile a day keeps the world in 's. Bernie Slicker |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, a Neil Diamond fan that rocks! Well done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now, another star emerges. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Great write!! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Wow! So much sentiment in so few words. This is wonderful! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wonderfully said |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
wonderful job....I liked the message |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Melissa...was the first time I had attempted this form...thank you Sea...thank you so much... Bernie...some things are neverending...and somethings...well they should end Sunshine...lol...thank you Interloper...I dont feel like a star...just a woman reaching for one JLR...thank you Tennessee Angel...there neednt be a lot of words to say whats in your heart...thanks Paula...thank you Alan...glad you liked it...thank you |
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