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forevernbluejeans
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0 posted 2001-04-12 03:22 PM


Never
In all my life
Have I felt love like this
Passion, desire, consuming me
Never

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Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-04-12 03:34 PM



A beautiful cinquain, very few have had the chance to feel this way, you express it perfectly~

Take care,
Melissa~

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-04-12 03:38 PM


you did this wonderfully!    SEA
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state of mind
3 posted 2001-04-12 03:40 PM


Nice write,
Never ending..
Bernie
a smile a day keeps the world in  's.

Bernie Slicker

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-04-12 04:31 PM


Ah, a Neil Diamond fan that rocks!  Well done!
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-04-12 04:34 PM


Now, another star emerges.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


JLR
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6 posted 2001-04-12 09:27 PM


Great write!!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Tennessee Angel
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7 posted 2001-04-12 09:37 PM


Wow!  So much sentiment in so few words.  This is wonderful!  
Paula Finn
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missouri
8 posted 2001-04-13 02:22 PM


Wonderfully said
Alan
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right next door
9 posted 2001-04-18 11:30 PM


wonderful job....I liked the message
forevernbluejeans
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10 posted 2001-05-06 12:20 PM


Melissa...was the first time I had attempted this form...thank you

Sea...thank you so much...

Bernie...some things are neverending...and somethings...well they should end

Sunshine...lol...thank you

Interloper...I dont feel like a star...just a woman reaching for one

JLR...thank you

Tennessee Angel...there neednt be a lot of words to say whats in your heart...thanks

Paula...thank you

Alan...glad you liked it...thank you

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