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Open Poetry #13
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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-04-27 06:09 PM


Let me be your fountain,
an endless supply of water,
that will forever feed you.
Let me be your geyser,
and floating in my currents I will take you,
to where my passion flows.
Let me be your ocean,
in me you will find,
the nourishment that gives you life.
Let me be your river,
through me insatiably,
quench your thirst.
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1 posted 2001-04-27 06:18 PM

nice   I liked this very much     SEA
PortuguesePoet
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since 2001-04-24
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2 posted 2001-04-27 06:21 PM

I liked this poem. Nice water imagery. The poem left me feeling calm and tranquil. Good Work.
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