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Open Poetry #13

I am falling up - senryu

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-24 05:09 PM

I am falling up
The correct preposition
Requires some thinking

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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USA

1 posted 2001-04-24 05:17 PM

So true. Continue writing thoughtfully. It suits you.

Martinque
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since 2000-05-17

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2 posted 2001-04-24 08:03 PM

Interesting write. Very thoughtful!

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

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Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-24 08:06 PM

Love it, suits my mood just right this evening.

"I am not now that which I have been."

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2001-04-24 08:08 PM

i like it yuh

BrightStar
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since 2001-04-08

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5 posted 2001-04-25 11:24 AM

Thought provoking.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

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Mississippi coast

6 posted 2001-04-26 06:07 AM

I live on a sphere
Am I there or am I here
I only fall OUT

Most think they fall DOWN
Gravity pulls me back IN
I live on a sphere

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

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7 posted 2001-04-26 07:01 AM

LOL

It certainly does...thanks for sharing

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-04-27 12:26 PM

don't laugh but when I was 5 or 6 I fell up someone's steps..needed one stitch in my lip and missed eating Chinese food for dinner which back then was a real treat for a large family

~Wynter..so I know falling "up"

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-04-27 06:26 PM

fall up.....yea, I could do that.....clumsy...I'm very clumsy

SEA

PortuguesePoet
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since 2001-04-24

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10 posted 2001-04-27 06:30 PM

LOL

Gravity, Gravity where art thou...

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