Open Poetry #13 |
The Voyage |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Repost: The voyage Steeped from dreams like tea from leaves Pushed by puffs of memory gusts. The mind sails in lacy weaves In the past of omnibus. Through storms and fog and nights of doubt, This vessel rights on heart and might And never will it come about, Till eyeing shoal or goal in sight. What cannot eye will come to be. For every try there is a latch, For every lock there is a key, For every key there is a match. The soul of love steers this course, Into an end that's yet to come. It goes beyond the albatross, To reach and meld two souls as one. For souls that join and meet the test. Are those that live and love the best |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What cannot eye will come to be. For every try there is a latch, For every lock there is a key, For every key there is a match. The soul of love steers this course, Into an end that's yet to come. It goes beyond the albatross, To reach and meld two souls as one. For souls that join and meet the test. Are those that live and love the best ======================= when one sails on your mind's seas ... one is baptized in waves of wisdom... and bathed in rhyme divine. *winkiewinkie* me Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: May all souls meet, if not in heaven right here on earth, for rightful living... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Forgot to library this keeper.... |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Beautifully expressed PoetFriend and a treasure for my libray... Hugs2u |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"For every key there is a match" Are you SURE, Seymour? *G* Cuz yanno... this voyage would be a lot more pleasant if I had some help with the rowing! LOL. Seriously... great work... and I'll just keep hoping on that last couplet. *S* |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Such a constructive poem. I loved it. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'The soul of love steers this course, Into an end that's yet to come. It goes beyond the albatross, To reach and meld two souls as one.' Ahhhhhh ! Sailing into the sunset of ONE ! What a lovely piece. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Seymour! You have such wonderful internal rhymes ... what a beautiful flow your words take on, magnificent! Best wishes, /Kit |
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