Open Poetry #13 |
One Miracle, the child |
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Watching the world Seeing, People flock to shadows, statues, pictures on walls. When every day Flowers bloom, grass turns green, trees grows buds, then colors perform. Greatest Miracle To me, The Mother gives, Gives birth, to you and me, Then the child, is Born Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Bernie? This is special. I love the inherent understanding of spirituality in this piece. Very, very impressed, my friend. I'd like to ask your permission to print this one for Beltane...(one of MY holidays... ) My girls will love this one! thank you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I have to agree...so much love and expectaion in this one...waiting on that miracle |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
b..........this is a beautiful poem...one of your best...h "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
senenity, thanks and yes print it out, by all means. Paula, Thanks for reading Lady,, Helen Thank you, very, very, very much. Means a whole lot coming from u. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well done Bernie....loved the thoughts in this. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Thank you Elizabeth, I must have re-wrote this a hundred times last night before I had the message that I wanted to say come out in this piece. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
This is lovely |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Forever, Thank you for reading, for there are miracles around us every day, and a lot of us just seem to forget that they are miracles, starting within ourself's. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bernie I loved this! We of course are the greatest miracle of all, as like a single snowflake,there are not two human beings created the same (yet!), and if we miss the little miracles, we miss life! Great poem. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And no greater miracle is there. I loved this! Michael Proust- |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
just have to say again this is a beautiful poem "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
The anticipation... a beautiful miracle. LP |
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