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forevernbluejeans
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0 posted 2001-04-06 02:15 AM


Held there in his warm embrace,
Satisfaction on her face,
Turning her head to hide the lies
Shadowed there within her eyes
As she longs for anothers' kiss.

She whispers the words  he needs to hear
Places warm wet kisses on his ear.
Plays the games she's learned so well
Creates her own private, living hell,
As she longs for anothers' kiss.

She lives a life of soft deceit
He doesnt yet know of his defeat,
As she lays there in his loving arms
She woos him with her own false charms,
As she longs for anothers' kiss.

Her heart will not be satisfied
With his gentle loving sighs.
She lingers 'though she's already gone
He doesnt know he loves alone,
As she longs for anothers' kiss.



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Packratmike
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1 posted 2001-04-06 04:12 AM


Nicely written but so sad.....poor guy.

Mike

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-04-06 06:23 AM


welcome to Passions!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Nan
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3 posted 2001-04-06 07:13 AM


You've expressed the inherent feelings of love gone awry quite nicely here.  Welcome to Passions - It's a great place, and I expect you'll find a comfy place to settle in and read... Check your email for a special greeting..
kitkat
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4 posted 2001-04-06 08:49 AM


You have written this well. To bad that people give others false hope of a relationship that is over.
Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2001-04-06 08:54 AM


another kiss, has power and passion that keeps you there no matter what, sometimes it's not all good, but sometimes it's not all bad, just a thought..
SEA
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with you
6 posted 2001-04-06 08:56 AM


Wow! and Welcome! The emotions pour out of this.....it does seem sad.....but also like there is more going on......very nicely done!!   SEA
helen smith
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7 posted 2001-04-06 08:58 AM


loved it  loved it   loved it
Sunshine
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8 posted 2001-04-06 09:24 AM


Welcome to Passions!  A Neil Diamond fan, I presume?  I hope so!  We need more of them around here!


forevernbluejeans
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9 posted 2001-04-06 01:09 PM


Packratmike...thank you...yes it is sad but such things happen...thank you

Irish Rose...thank you

Nan...thank you for the sweet welcome...I expect to enjoy my time here however limited it may be...

kitkat...thank you and yes it is, but things do happen for a reason...at least I hope they do

Rosebud1229...when its the right persons kiss its wonderful...but when its someone elses kiss they long for

Sea...thank you...and much more going on yes I think so

helen smith...thank you thnak you thank you

Sunshine...lol thank you for the welcome...Neil Diamond? I wasnt thinking much of that old song...more about how I live my life  but I do like him

Sven
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10 posted 2001-04-06 01:18 PM


welcome. . .

there is a lot going on in this poem. . . too bad for the character that it has to be this way. . . for both of them. . .

well written. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

suthern
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11 posted 2001-04-06 04:18 PM


Excellent entrance you've made with this one. *S* Welcome to Passions!
Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee
12 posted 2001-04-06 11:21 PM


Don't know how I missed this one before, but it's an excellent write.  Look forward to reading more from you.  
banburycross
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viginia
13 posted 2001-04-07 12:49 PM


This is a very well written piece and an excellent first post.  i can't help but feel sorry for the guy though...

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2001-04-07 05:32 PM


Ahhh....such sadness for them both....but life is what it is at times, and what we let it become.......you have penned this so well.  Welcome to passions, I think you will like it here.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

snowpants
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15 posted 2001-04-09 08:58 PM


'Her heart will not be satisfied
With his gentle loving sighs.
She lingers 'though she's already gone
He doesnt know he loves alone,
As she longs for anothers' kiss.'

Unfortunate situation, but great write, nonetheless!  Wonderfully written...welcome to Passions!  Looking forward to reading more of yours!  

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

Paula Finn
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missouri
16 posted 2001-04-28 02:25 PM


Such a sad situation...such a well written poem
Joyce Johnson
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17 posted 2001-04-28 02:37 PM


Oh, dear.  I don't like her much, but this is a well written poem.  Welcome, I see you are quite new here.  Joyce
latin passion
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18 posted 2001-04-28 03:38 PM


nicely written - msg rec.

[This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 04-28-2001).]

VAS
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19 posted 2001-04-28 04:09 PM


Extremely well-written but terribly sad.  Welcome to passions!
JamesMichael
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20 posted 2001-04-28 05:25 PM


Enjoyed reading your poem...James
mistyrose
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state of anxiety
21 posted 2001-04-28 05:44 PM


this happens..umm...
longing
for another's kiss
shameful to
admit
i have been there

yee gads..did i admit that?

you described this oh so well
thank you

~mistyrose

Jesse Jaymz
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Youngstown, ohio
22 posted 2001-04-29 03:35 AM


been the guy in this situation.  *is in tears*  great poem and welcome to passions.  this is excelent.
love ya
jesse

All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground.

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