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| Open Poetry #13 |
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Anothers' Kiss |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Held there in his warm embrace, Satisfaction on her face, Turning her head to hide the lies Shadowed there within her eyes As she longs for anothers' kiss. She whispers the words he needs to hear Places warm wet kisses on his ear. Plays the games she's learned so well Creates her own private, living hell, As she longs for anothers' kiss. She lives a life of soft deceit He doesnt yet know of his defeat, As she lays there in his loving arms She woos him with her own false charms, As she longs for anothers' kiss. Her heart will not be satisfied With his gentle loving sighs. She lingers 'though she's already gone He doesnt know he loves alone, As she longs for anothers' kiss. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Nicely written but so sad.....poor guy. Mike |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
welcome to Passions!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've expressed the inherent feelings of love gone awry quite nicely here. Welcome to Passions - It's a great place, and I expect you'll find a comfy place to settle in and read... Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
You have written this well. To bad that people give others false hope of a relationship that is over. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
another kiss, has power and passion that keeps you there no matter what, sometimes it's not all good, but sometimes it's not all bad, just a thought.. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow! and Welcome! The emotions pour out of this.....it does seem sad.....but also like there is more going on......very nicely done!!  SEA |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
loved it loved it loved it |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! A Neil Diamond fan, I presume? I hope so! We need more of them around here! |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Packratmike...thank you...yes it is sad but such things happen...thank you Irish Rose...thank you Nan...thank you for the sweet welcome...I expect to enjoy my time here however limited it may be... kitkat...thank you and yes it is, but things do happen for a reason...at least I hope they do Rosebud1229...when its the right persons kiss its wonderful...but when its someone elses kiss they long for Sea...thank you...and much more going on yes I think so helen smith...thank you thnak you thank you Sunshine...lol thank you for the welcome...Neil Diamond? I wasnt thinking much of that old song...more about how I live my life but I do like him |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
welcome. . . there is a lot going on in this poem. . . too bad for the character that it has to be this way. . . for both of them. . . well written. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent entrance you've made with this one. *S* Welcome to Passions! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Don't know how I missed this one before, but it's an excellent write. Look forward to reading more from you. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is a very well written piece and an excellent first post. i can't help but feel sorry for the guy though... Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ahhh....such sadness for them both....but life is what it is at times, and what we let it become.......you have penned this so well. Welcome to passions, I think you will like it here. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Her heart will not be satisfied With his gentle loving sighs. She lingers 'though she's already gone He doesnt know he loves alone, As she longs for anothers' kiss.' Unfortunate situation, but great write, nonetheless! Wonderfully written...welcome to Passions! Looking forward to reading more of yours! sp  to be with you... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a sad situation...such a well written poem |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, dear. I don't like her much, but this is a well written poem. Welcome, I see you are quite new here. Joyce |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
nicely written - msg rec. [This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Extremely well-written but terribly sad. Welcome to passions! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
this happens..umm... longing for another's kiss shameful to admit i have been there yee gads..did i admit that? you described this oh so well thank you ~mistyrose |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
been the guy in this situation. *is in tears* great poem and welcome to passions. this is excelent. love ya jesse All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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