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Never have, Never will
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Never have, Never will This is not the way it was supposed to end How it was supposed to end I don’t know but this I find uncomfortable I wish now that I had said nothing to influence this ending I suspect that I could not have said anything different but I could have said nothing Then at least I might not have felt responsible for it I don’t like endings never have never will Perhaps that’s why I prefer circular thinking have trouble finishing things off and can’t handle good-byes Something to teach your children? Maybe I’ll stop and see you sometime . . . maybe not Krawdad ?.?.97? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This sort of took me in circles. But then it's late, maybe that's it. Joyce |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
k...i too hate goodbyes....they are so sad & sound so final...how you make my tears flow...h "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is written almost indifferently - was that the intention? I like it...it works...  K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrawDad~ I felt the intensity of this piece~ Sometimes it happens just that way~ And in the 'end' we loop back through circling memories ... I'm with you ... I LOVE CIRCLES ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Trying to find an end in a circle is indeed confusing kraw---and this DID seem to have a flavor of irreverence to it...or maybe it's just ME!  Enjoyed, e. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
*every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...* i guess i'm the opposite... i like the end, cause it means a new horizon  i have a real problem with the concept of "eternity"... but i didn't always think this way, i i feel you. wonderful thoughts. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Perhaps that’s why I prefer circular thinking have trouble finishing things off and can’t handle good-byes Something to teach your children? ========================== wise ponderings Krawdad.... a very cool poem... made me think of Frosts poem... Nothing Gold Can Stay. great writing. (Ethan!! What a very cool quote!!!) Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
This, I understood completely. Excellent writing. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I understand completely. I hate endings too...very much. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
but I could have said nothing...circular thinking... Every word of this is amazing a appreciated! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Thank you all for stopping by. Funny how something you think is just a throw-away turns out to be something else for the reader. This is not the first time this has happened and I have only an inkling of why. Joyce, Took me in circles too. Lady, Well, it was like that, but tears are meant to be cleansing, no? Severn, Ambivalent, yes, but not indifferent. Indifference is the antithesis of care and love. Marge, Gee, how did I know you would? Serenity, Irreverence? Hmmm . . . some bitterness. Ethan, Your response has me pondering. The eternity problem? I think of myself as being there. My linear thinking friends see eternity as the end point in their journey. Very curious. Vandana, Glad you enjoyed. Janet, Thanks, I'm flattered by your comments. Tessa & PoeticKnight, You understood? I didn't. I still don't understand these things. "never have, never will." JLR, Thank you for the "amazing." Krawdad |
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