Open Poetry #13 |
So Hard To Say Goodbye |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
As we said our goodbyes Neither wanting to let go So much was my love Continuing to grow Just one more kiss before we'd part Would help to still my beating heart Do you feel my warm kiss? Do you like what you feel? Does your mind, just like mine Not allow such feelings to be real? Always after being together I have trouble letting go There's so much that I have to say So much I want you to know Never is there enough hours To spend here with you To have you with me for 24 hours Still would never do How easily do I surrender To your tenderness and your charms How safe do I feel when I'm close to you Surrounded by your loving arms Is it wrong for me to love you? With you is where I want to be So much warmth do you radiate Right into the heart and soul of me One minute of the day from you Is something I cannot miss How easily I could lose myself in you With just one lingering kiss When I close my eyes at night to sleep There's a piece of you in my heart I keep Whenever I feel pain When my thoughts are unclear I reach inside my heart And take comfort that you're near An angel in disguise It comes as no surprise That you're from heaven above As you surround me with your love Nothing else I wish to see Than you here beside me Where our spirits will be set free Suetang |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very beautiful write. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
totaly beautiful. *hugs* i love this. feel free to e-mail or icq me. i would love to chat about this poem. i loved it love ya jesse All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful! I especially like the next to last verse. *S* |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Hang in there. This one is a keeper. Joyce |
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