A Slice Of The Devil's Pie(rewrite)

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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-04-14 03:52 AM

Hello Passions, I hope all is well...This is another one of my conscious/philosophical pieces but, I must say that it has a darker feel to it in terms of imagery....the original version of this was about life on the streets and how thieves, crack feigns, drug dealers, and etc, are eating from the same plate of devil's pie whether it's through drugs, money, or whatever...anyways, I hope y'll like my rewrite...if not, I'll probaly write the original one for y'll...peace!!

Do you want a slice of the devil's pie?
I know it looks good but, you should think,
before you incite to take a bite
or better yet, think about snow white
cause, whatever Satan does, ain't right
as, he's decietful as one can be
and he knows that our minds are weak and feeble
so, he practice ill tactics to reach the people,
whether it's a vision, or dream
he can get through to you,
no matter how hard it seems.
He can be very decieving to the human eye
especially, when he appears as Christ in my dreams
trying to offer me a slice, of his pie
when all along, I know that it's Satan in disguise
cause Jesus, would never offer me drugs to get high,
as he applies heavy aggression, to his unrelenting expression
and concedes to me saying, "my message is urgent"
and then, I would flash my christ pendant in his eyes
and simutaneously, he would morph into a black serpent
that withers, slithers and crawls back down,
into the pits of blackness that's underground
as he stays there until he can lure a weak-minded soul,
with dreams of living a life gleamed with silver and gold
as Satan will always be around,
and souls will always be hell-bound.
I urge you all not to take a slice of the devil's pie
and sacrifice your soul to Satan, for the rest of your life
because, you would have no control over what you do
as your life would be, plagued by greed and sinful deeds
and before you know it, it'll be too late before logic hits you
as you'll face, intense, torture and pain,
as you'll burn unmercifully in hell's fire,
and as you dip lower and lower into the flames,
you'll be screaming in vain, with tears running down your face
but just think, that none of this would be happening,
if you hadn't eaten a slice of the devil's pie in the first place!

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 04-16-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-14 08:46 AM

I'm on a diet!!! Enjoyed.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

2 posted 2001-04-14 08:55 AM

Wow! Suddenly I have lost my appetite! This is an interesting subject, written well. Excellent read, enjoyed greatly

~Becky~

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

3 posted 2001-04-28 10:49 AM

ALREADY!! THAT'S ALL I CAN REALLY SAY. THAT WAS A SLAP IN THE FACE FOR SATAN. I'M READY FOR CHRUCH TOMORROW.

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-04-29 10:52 AM

Thank you all, for your wonderful comments!

Nathan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-04-29 03:58 PM

Reminds me of some thoughts.
We have control over our decisions but we never control the consequences.
So we decide to drink and we decide to drive and from that point onward we have no control over the outcome.
James

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