Open Poetry #13 |
A Slice Of The Devil's Pie(rewrite) |
Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hello Passions, I hope all is well...This is another one of my conscious/philosophical pieces but, I must say that it has a darker feel to it in terms of imagery....the original version of this was about life on the streets and how thieves, crack feigns, drug dealers, and etc, are eating from the same plate of devil's pie whether it's through drugs, money, or whatever...anyways, I hope y'll like my rewrite...if not, I'll probaly write the original one for y'll...peace!! Do you want a slice of the devil's pie? I know it looks good but, you should think, before you incite to take a bite or better yet, think about snow white cause, whatever Satan does, ain't right as, he's decietful as one can be and he knows that our minds are weak and feeble so, he practice ill tactics to reach the people, whether it's a vision, or dream he can get through to you, no matter how hard it seems. He can be very decieving to the human eye especially, when he appears as Christ in my dreams trying to offer me a slice, of his pie when all along, I know that it's Satan in disguise cause Jesus, would never offer me drugs to get high, as he applies heavy aggression, to his unrelenting expression and concedes to me saying, "my message is urgent" and then, I would flash my christ pendant in his eyes and simutaneously, he would morph into a black serpent that withers, slithers and crawls back down, into the pits of blackness that's underground as he stays there until he can lure a weak-minded soul, with dreams of living a life gleamed with silver and gold as Satan will always be around, and souls will always be hell-bound. I urge you all not to take a slice of the devil's pie and sacrifice your soul to Satan, for the rest of your life because, you would have no control over what you do as your life would be, plagued by greed and sinful deeds and before you know it, it'll be too late before logic hits you as you'll face, intense, torture and pain, as you'll burn unmercifully in hell's fire, and as you dip lower and lower into the flames, you'll be screaming in vain, with tears running down your face but just think, that none of this would be happening, if you hadn't eaten a slice of the devil's pie in the first place! [This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 04-16-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm on a diet!!! Enjoyed. Kathleen Blake |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Wow! Suddenly I have lost my appetite! This is an interesting subject, written well. Excellent read, enjoyed greatly ~Becky~ |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
ALREADY!! THAT'S ALL I CAN REALLY SAY. THAT WAS A SLAP IN THE FACE FOR SATAN. I'M READY FOR CHRUCH TOMORROW. NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17 |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you all, for your wonderful comments! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of some thoughts. We have control over our decisions but we never control the consequences. So we decide to drink and we decide to drive and from that point onward we have no control over the outcome. James |
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